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Posted: 12 years ago
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love update next chapter soon. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
nice start upi👏
loved it😊
will b waiting for d next part😊
and wen r u gonna update ur other works😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ko nhi mahinon tak yeh likhti rhegi mereko koi prob nhi hai lekin redeeming pe aa ja isse pehle main fir se bore ho jaun...

bahut mushkil se edeeming ke bal pe khadi hun varna fisal hi jaungi and sab se bore hone lag jaungi!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice part...kriya is engaged...waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome
loved it
gr8 work
am loving the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nyc but too mysterius what that but nyc update update fast to clear that confusin
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Posted: 12 years ago
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firstt i'm realllyy sorry dearr am latee
but as alwayyss again amazing concept ..
Luv it... really update soon can't wait fr 2nd chap...:)
thanxx fr PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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C h a p t e r T w o



Those Glacial stroke's almost broke her down.She searched out for warmth .Finally she found her beloved shawl , Her mother's shawl . She gently rubbed it with her cold cheek's and felt the utmost level of warmth , A mother's Love .


Her eye's were wet by now , and gelid wind added to it . Her nose turned red .


She looked into that endless sky above her head ! Beautiful ! How this sky manages to carry so many star's in it's LAP ? she wonder's . But again .. she was swayed in the flow of endless memories .


Rajma Chawal , Paneer parantha , Chilly sauce ! she missed them badly .. "I wish you were here with me Mum " she uttered with her sobbing heart ..

She still remember's every moment ! How she came to St. Louis , made new friends and some rival's too . But a new's took all she had , her friends , her happiness and her MOM !

Her mom was having Blood cancer ! the worst phase of cancer one can see !

She could do nothing but cry on her fate .

She left college , friends , everything , and returned to her homeland with her mother .



..Soon she heard foot step's . She woke up abruptly ,

"How was the day ?" He asked ,

"It was as blossoming as always .." she said in her feeble tone.


He was smart , handsome , workaholic , yet he cared for her ..Umm yeah he do !


"Where's the supper ? " he asked .


"There on the table , with your favorite set !" she replied with utmost humbleness .






As the springs around her changed things moved on in their regular pattern .






The morning came , night was gone but wounds were still there ! She was sitting on the floor , in her mermaid frock . Her neck was paining , Her arm's were swollen .

An immense pain hit her chest ! She touched those red mark's on her shoulder , still they were paining ..


"Today is Saturday !hell .." "i can't go like this ? " she cried .


She wasn't willing to go anywhere today in that tacky look , she can't tolerate those piercing eye's of people examining her like that ! But still She was excited to meet him as she promised him last time they met !





Unknowingly , she was attracted towards him ! Maybe , she found a strong person in him who can protect her or give her a new life ! But how will she say anything to him ! No she can't trouble anyone's life for her own safety !She wouldn't say anything to him ? she decided !


"Come out sweety ???" she heard a hard voice . She immediately came out from the washroom.


"I'll be out of town this week ..Is it okay ! you wan't to come with me ? "


" No its fine KARTHIK , i'll stay at home , and wait for your arrival , moreover , I'am not feeling well ." she excused ,


"Ohh ! what happened ..??? " he said in a worried tone holding her shoulder , tight ,


"nah ! usual fever ! I'll take care .." she said it speedily as her shoulder's were paining .


"Oaky I'll see you .! ." He kissed her lips and left the room .


She was happy ! obviously she was ! Today she was free to do anything .Meet anybody !


After he left for his trip ,She went down to fetch her empty tummy some snacks ,and there she found a booklet .

It stated ...

  • Are you interested in letting yourself free ?
  • Do you like to DANCE ?
Then hop in the coolest dance night ! 18 december 9:pm !
Dance palace , mumbai .


"Should i go ? "

"Or should i leave it ? "

"Should i go ? "

"Or should i leave it ..."


"You should go there ..." Some one spoke from behind .


"What the f**k ! you bitch , i will kick your ass out ! WHAT are you doing here ...??? " she yelled .


" Umm .. I'm here because I'am hungry ! want to eat something yummy so I'am here to eat you !" he winked .


"Rey shut up ! are you aware of what are you doing ! leave now ! " she yelled again .

"I saw his car leaving the mansion so i hopped in ! " Rey said in his easy attitude playing with an apple .


" No ! REY ! leave now !" she pleaded him , and this time showing him way to leave !

He held her arm and tug them behind her back .


"Leave me ..." she barked .

"Ahh ..." she screamed .

He just realized that she was in pain . " Kriya did you fell down ? "

Kriya nodded "No"

"Then why are these scar's on your arms ? "

"Um.. nothing serious Rey ! ... " she muttered lowering her gaze .

He could not believe his eye's , he saw her neck , there were clear imprints of finger's .

"Kriya ..." he whispered ...softly .."Did he ... Jagged , fornicate ???? "


"________" She couldn't answer further and just broke down crying .She hugged him tight .Letting all her pain's and emotions wash over his shoulder's .




He hugged her back too , providing her emotion's a warmth for which she parched .


"Live with me ..." he whispered .

"I can't and you know well ! " she replied .

"Please .. Live with me ..." he whispered again .


And this time she didn't replied Him.

She was happy , she found him . It was now More than a month since they were in contact with each other . But still both didn't knew what they exactly felt for each other , One thing was sure , No way Rey was letting his best friend ( ;) till now) lead such a miserable life .


"You should go there , i'll accompany you ! "

"Rey .. but firstly i have to ask from karthik ..." her eye's went down taking his name , not because of blushing but because of fear of the expected answer ! No !



Ps: I have jumped this story a bit as u read just now ! So just wait for something unexpected ! Yeah for sure ! it will amaze you !


P.P.S : If you want Pm's for upcoming updates , then all you have to do is COMMENT ! and i'll Pm you !
And please make sure you Like the update 😆 ! I mean Like the post :P
Till then LOVE ya ! 😉 (; (:
Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resd (: for vaishu .. :P *sigh* tere liye :P😳 😆

Originally posted by: kriyansh24




update bahut confusing thaa...bas tu english thodi asaan wali use kiya kar..

mereko fir dictionary kholni padi...

u know jagged fornicate... mera guess sahi tha.. yayyy!!!!!!!

lekin mereko confusion.. yeh achanak se 1 month beech mein kaise aa gaya.. and best friend kahan se aa gaya????

and tune tere liye ke saath dead emticon kyun daala...

main pasand nhi kya 😭

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome Update...Loved it...Poor Kria kya kya sahen kar rahi hai...aur us Karthik ne kria par force kiya...acha hua Kria Rey ke sath chali gayi...aur 1 Month ho bhi gaya...aur woh dono best Friends ban gaye...interesting...waiting for the next update...
Edited by SanjArShi-ASR - 12 years ago

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