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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Fab prt..wat to say more..? ! Evrythng ws perfect...
Dat bloody karthik...he slapped kria..! Huh...
Waiting fr da nxt prt..

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
D starting part was very hot n sensious ..!
Very intemating ..!
But beautifully written ..!
But d end of d update is very heart breaking ..!
Hopefully everything gets well n our rey saves kriya ...!
Update soon cnt wait 4 it ..!
Hopefuuly karthik gets wat he deservce's ..!
Rey gets his kriya back n dey live 2 gether ..!
Update soon waiting egarly 2 read more ..!
Plz update soon ..!

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

OMG!!!!! upiii dis was amazing
soo beautifully writter
bt ending...chl chod ek bar use

you written dere love making session sooo beautifully
i loved it alot
n pagal kal mera xam h n maine aaj ye pada hayeee kya hoga mera kal 🤣

n dat karthik oho usne bar hi purchase kr lia 😲
kitna bada kamina h ye to 😡

n nw wht...nxt jaldi update kr i want to read nxt i knw bada intrsring hoga

bt kal mera kya hoga upiii 😆

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

merko kuch kuch hoying ye part padh kr...hehehe 😆

n mera blush wala xpression hat hi ni ra...meri sis kch galat samjh ri h ab to 🤣

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
so here i am unresing too...

what to say...

i just loved it...

the part which was wanting that toh haan lekin the end also,...

so very beautifully portrayed...

obviously...

karthik uncle wud have to own the bar varna he wudn't have allowed kriya to go there... wud he???

so comin to the update...

i had to open the dictionary again...

ab yeh bata how u write so well?????????

i mean nothing vulgar not stressing the facts...

just mere usage of words and all is done and the pictured.. painted... ahh!!!!!!

loved it,...

then the kriya's turmoil...

everything/...

just A1 class...

thankew vaishu !! me loves you dher sara!

Just tried to put some adjective's to beautify and more use of synonym's .. and it was done !!

Baby got to rush ! .. 😔

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Wow. .
Super hawwttt update. . . . . . .
Kriyaansh r crazily in love with each othr. .
Bt,the end of the update was horrifyng. .
Karthikh,he is such a b*****d. . .
Kriyaansh ki life is in danger. . .
Abb kya hoga??
Pls nxt part jaldi update krna. .

Thanks ! madhu ! ... wil surely . live upto the spirit's and update soon ! (:

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: -shenz-
oh damn... I loved it...

u portrayed it so well... everything seems to b so picture perfect...

she is gonna sacrifice love for her love... but was it of any use..

karthik is such a big jerk... he owned that bar... so may b thats the reason y he allowed her there...

is he really thinking of challenging Rey... he is sure inviting trouble for himself...

i loved it... love the way u write...

thankew di ! 🤗 .. 😳

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s
awesome update...

thankew ! (:

Originally posted by: rhu90
superb update...pls update next part asap...

thanks rhu ! will update surely soon !

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Again another fantastic update
loved it
the way u pictured everything...amazing
oh hell karthik owns that bar...
eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks mannu ! glad tuje pasand aya ! 😊😳