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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Well Arnav is lucky to have someone like Khushi to love him unconditionally but I am happy that he's been given a second chance bcz life is abt chances and the child needs a Dad plus he's really ashamed of what he's done.

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

thanks for giving such lovely concept. thoroughly enjoyed... waiting for ur next new concept... do pm on ur works... but little depressed that it has come to an end...

thank u

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.Spring.

@.Spring.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

congratulations zehra.!!
For completing this ss by such a beautiful end..!.
thanks u so much for writing this ss as well as pming me each and every update
this is the best of bEstEst piece of writing by u yet ...
Purely unique concept..
Darky one
and then the process of coming back to normal..
Is jst awesome...luking frward for ur next idea..
Thanks for such wonderful updates

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

oH goddd u ende it here :( :( i wanted more of this FF love ittt

Gosh cnt wait fr ur next one <3

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Heya nice update...loved it very much...thanks for the pm..

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Okay lazyeaves here I am with my comment

dear first of a I want to confess that I simply love you..for me arnav and kushi is just another couple not my favs as iam DMG fan but you my dear you make me see the different expect of them.. usually I wouldn't have accept the fact kushi forgiven him ..as in all ff most of the writer show arnav worst side but they et kushi forgive him easily(my comment is not to offend any one but this is my thought)..but you present me different story ..your this is absoutly perfect if it is in my hand i would have published it no doubt ..I dont know once i had i guess 80 pms but after looking so much pm the one pm my heart says to open is yours and it always happen i just crave to read your story..after reading your this story I guess that allah has really given you a very creative brain

okay done with your praises now mabout what i most ike about story

1.The best thing about your story is how you present it the fow and most importanty the theme...your some updates make me cry whie some make me have butterfies in my stomach seriousy and some amuse me to extent that I feel like re reading it...your this story will aways remain in my heart..you it so greatly and there is not even a single update that dispoint me or i can say i dont like that update ...

The way you show worst side side of arnav and then his unconditional ove for him..athough his mistake seems like it can never redemp but you make me beieve yes even worse mistake can be redemp...this was the perfect imagination of yours and the way you handle it with ocnstant fllow hats of to you 👏

and the ending is just perfect 😳

though iam sad that story ended but i am happy and satisfied ateast you did justice with the ending of story

thankx for such a beautiful story dear

may allah bless you

Maria:)

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

This was a reallly amazing story. Now the story destroyed and unconditional has ended to b in the etenal pages of history of fiction forum of India Forums...I will priviliged to b a reader of this wonderful script...I do not know whether I should b sad or happy that this ended...sad that I wont get to read this again other than rereading the whole of destroyed and unconditional and happy that it ended very beautifully and very elegantly covering every looop holes it had...I am mesmerized...

U truly deserve a bow and a hats off and also a standing ovation for penning down this beautiful script...Shabdh kam pad jaygene, waqt tham jayenge, par aapki aur aapki kahani kii tareef mein hum kuch bhi kahe kam heee rahegaaa...

Only thing tat i get to write to praise this work is maashallaaahhh...

Thnx for the PMs for this beautiful script and making me a reader of ur writings...

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neena

@shadesofme

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

thanks for ending it properly!!!!!!!!!
but still cant believe that its over now!!!!
hope u come up with a new one soon!!!!!!!
loved it n hated it in some parts but never ignored it!!!!!!!

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Awsome Ending...Loved it...Dev Anjali Aur Aman ka Beta hai...Acha hua Khushi aur Baby dono bhi bach gaye...aur Khushi ko pata tha ke Arnav kaha hai..Finally Arnav aur Khushi ek sath ho gaye...Awsome Story...Loved it...