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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

how to write the exact words without sounding rude..

and i had this line for quite long time...so m gonna say it even if i sound rude n it offend u deeply...

Will u stop surprising me and shocking me...??? *n i mean it seriously*

the story took my breath away...

all the time while reading destroyed i thought that may be she knew shyam and its a bit like the show...

but nah i was so wrong...

u gal completely blew my head off...

i mean how can u write so well..

are u sure u a human not some superhuman or a rebirth or some other person...??? u know what i mean..no ohk *scratching my head in embarrassment* then leave it...i'll take it as u understood what i mean...*laughing sheepishly*

well star plus gave us a couple we fall in love with that couple with their chemistry...

but in the time of ups and downs what made me a constant fan of that couple is the immense effort of authors like u...

u creating a world...u gave us a hope that no matter what crap they are showing in the show...

authors like u will never let arnav khushi die so brutally...

i have been vocal to the feeling but today i am not getting right words to show my gratitude...to u and many other writers be it a very famous fan fiction or a one with not many readers...coz i know it takes a lot of effort to write and on top of that it takes a big heart to deal with the people reading ur fiction...and today m bowled...

ohk i wont bore u more...

but i just wanted to ask u this question...if it seem fit for u to answer please do answer it...

when i read about the "Spotlight FF of the week" there was this question what s the thing that make u write the FFs/SSs/OSs and u said that its a single line that gets converted into a story...if u dont mind will please u tell me the lines that made u write destroyed and unconditional...

after reading ur answer there i have this nagging or very pestering feeling to know those lines...and m dying outta curiosity...

thanks for sharing ur stories with us and thanks for giving me this opportunity to read ur work :)

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 12 years ago

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dreamgirlrus23

@dreamgirlrus23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

THIs IS THE BEST STORY ON ARSHI THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!

AWESOME MIND BLOWING SUPERB!!!

U r so talented dear writer...the way u write the flash backs n back to the present...wow...!!!!!

u really know how to keep ur readers glued to ur story!!!

i feel extrmly sad that i've jst read the last chapter!

ouff..the way u described khushi's state after being destroyed...applause dr!

wen i read at first that he told that lady to cut off her hairs i was damn shocked, hysterectomy...!!!!!! GOSH!

I wish u lots of love n success for the future!! I rly hope that u come up with such beautiful stories on Arshi!!

gud luck dr writer!

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

finally caught up with the last chapter of this SS Loved the way it ended with no oner fussing - everything done with actions and few words.

thanks for the happily ever after ending and the big surprise of aman and anjali and dev being their child. Loved how shyam will end up!!

Too good you derserve👍🏼⭐️🥳

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Wow just wow! I really loved Aman here! Amazing story! Wont you continue this story maybe with part 3?

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

wow...its really very good ...

b'ful

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

@lazyleaves: Nyc story n nyc thread!!!!😊

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

DEAR i happened to come across your story index yesterday...

Your stories are tooo good and it really touches the heart...

I just finished reading 'Unconditional' after 'Destroyed' and couldn't stop myself from commenting about the same...

both the stories are tooo good...great work...keep it up...

All the very best!!!!!

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Love the way you worte it brought tires in my eyes, you didn't disappoint x

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Anukriti

@psychofool

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

I came across your index a few days back and have read all your ss and ff...and destroyed and unconditional landed in my fav list...the story is really good and takes on an emotional journey...you and your sister both write very well...
keep the good work going