Dil hai k manta nahi..(sujal kashish) - Page 27

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey!

Interesting story yaar. Pls... Continue soon...... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 gr88888 part farah dii.......excellent sujal-kashish and australia eheh 😆 😆 😆 too gudd !!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i ve no wordz ths time.....ths part was jus mind blasting...
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Posted: 19 years ago
naice jee naice...very naice...luved i...mmatlab sujal acha bhi hai..hehehe...cuteee....ab yeh raaz jaldi faash ker do thakur..hehehe
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey farah.... yaar kya mindblowing parts likhe hai... 👏
last dono parts abhi hi padhe...
simply superb yaar Fantastic.... 😛 specially wen he says hospital tp karne gaya tha wow....haahha lol 😆
aap jaldi mei likho yaa aaramse parts toh ekdum fit hi hote hai.... 😉
aur yeah kya yaar ab curiosity badha di ye keh kar ki Sujal aur Sinha bhi ek Secret share kar rahe hai... 😳
plz dear ab jaldi se update kardo... 😊

(yeh emoticons ko aaj hi nahi chalna tha.... 😡 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
Omg..tht was 2 goooooooooooooooooooood!! Sujal aur Kashish...goin Australiaa!! wow!!
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Ab lagta hai k honeymoon per kuch romance ho hee jayega..unk beech mein..hainaaa??? Hona bhi chahiye...aakhir honeymoon hota kis liye hai..hehe..sirf romance kerne k liye....
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Post the next part soooooooooooooon..

Cant wait..
hehe...
love you..
Muah!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nice Partttt 👏 ..Continue Sooon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 tooo good now plzzzzzz make them have some romance in australia
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah yaara story continue karo..please jaldi continue karna... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok...dil hai k manta nahi...lolx

recap:...sujal plans to go to australia...with kashish ofcourse hehehe..pehli baar kashish
ko sujal mein naik insaan dikhta hai..lolx

.........
(empire)

akshat:..australia?
sujal:..hmmm
akshat:..honeymoon peh???
sujal:..haan..(smiles)
akshat:..tu????
sujal:..(looks at him and nods his head)
akshat:..aur...bhaaaa...aaa..kashish...
sujal:....to kya mein tere saath jaonga?? (smiles and puts the pen down)
akshat:..woow...(he sits on a chiar..infront of sujal....)..i am happy for you
sujal:...(smiles again)....kyun?
akshat:..aray...tu apni nayi zindagi shuru karne wala hai....
sujal:..hmm.....(looks away)....ab tu ja...aur purso keh do tickets.....
akshat:..pata hai....shaam tak de jaonga....
sujal:...good...

akshat comes near sujal...
sujal:..kya huwa....?
akshat:...khara ho
sujal:..khara??? (he looks at him)
akshat:...apne pairon peh khare hoo...yahan....(lol...woh ishara karte huwe samjhata hai)
sujal:...ab kya hai...(he stands up...and akshat hugs him lolx)

akshat:..yaar...have a happy wedded life.....(he quickly goes out lolx..ro raha tha bechara)
sujal:..(stands there in the same position....smiles)...akshat bhi na....(smirkes)...life to hai....happy rahe gi ya nahi ...... pata nahi....(he looks away and breaths out...)

..........

at home....

kashish:....mein kya karun
angad:..tum mana kardo kashish...(phone peh hain lolx)
kashish:..papa ko kaise mana karu.....angad muje kuch samaj mein nahi araha
angad:..tum sujal se baat kar ke dekho
kashish:..(very pareshan)...sujal...usse kya kahon...yeh ussi ka genious plan hai....
angad:....usne divorce papers peh sign kiya?
kashish:..nahi
angad:..nahi?????????/..par kyun????
kashish:..usne papers phar diye angad....(she sits on the bed..hold her head)...muje kuch
samaj nahi araha....

just then there is a voice:....kya samaj nahi araha beta....

kashish looks near the door..wahan...veena hoti hai...
kashish daar keh mare phone disconnect kar deti hai...while angad on the other side..hello karta rehta hai.lolx

kashish:..um...mama ap...(she goes near her and brings her inside)...muje bula liya hota

veena:...koi baat nahi....bhai sahab kaise hain?
kashish:...kafi behtar hain...
veena:..sujal bata raha tha...(kashish sits next to her...)

veena:..(after a while)..beta....ek baat pucho?
kashish:..puchiye na...(smiles)
veena:..tum khush ho...
kashish ki smile ahista se vanish hoti hai
veena apna haath kashish keh chehre par pherti hai...
kashish:...apko aisa kyun laga??
veena:..(pauses)...mein janti hon kashish.....har larki ke bahut sare khuwab hote hain....
khuwahishat hoti hain.....tumhare bhi honge...(looks at kashish...kashish nazre jhuka leti
hai)......aur phir yun achanak..ek naye rishte mein band jana.....apne purane sabhi naton
ko bhula keh....ek nayi zindagi bitana....ek larki keh liye bahut mushkil hota hai

veena holds her hand...and kashish feels a warmth...

veena:..mera beta bahut acha hai....upar se sakht hai...par andar se bahut naraam...dil ka
bura nahi hai......(kashish keeps her eyes closed)...uski koi baat buri lage...to muje
kehna.......(pauses)....mein sirf uski nahi...aj se...(holds kashish's chin..with her
fingers gently).....tumhari bhi maa hon....

kashish ki ankhon mein ansooo bhare pare the hehehehe.....and they all fall down..lolx

veena:..aray yeh kya (wipes her tears).....tum ro kyun rahi ho...?..(gets worried)
kashish:...kabhie ma ko nahi dekha.....aj aisa laga...apke roop mein muje woh rishta bhi
naseeb ho gaya......(she wipes her tears)...sujal sach mein bahut lucky hai.....

they both hug......while the camera zooms out...lolx

veena:..(facing the door)...tu bahir kyun khara hai...andar aao....
kashish turns around and sees sujal there.....looking at her....arms crossed....

veena:...tum kab aye
sujal:..bus ...abhi abhi....(he comes in)...
veena:...acha....tum log baatein karo....mein chalti hon.....(she pushes her chair..and
loses balance...sujal...jaldhi se agaye hota hai...but kashish reaches before him...and
hold onto veena)

kashish:..mama...sambhal ke....(itni der mein sujal reaches and help veena to sit up...lolx..
both sujal and kashish were holding veena..their hands on top of each other....and eye on each other too hehe)

veena:...haath phisal gaya tha...(she says....the maid comes in and takes veena away eheh)

.......

sujal:...thanx...(looks at kashish)
kashish:..kis baat keh liye?
sujal:...mama ko....(he doesnt have the appropriate words)....buss....thanx...(smiles and
goes in to change....kashish looks at him....aur uske chehre par bhi smile ajati hai...lolx)

.........

dinner time...

akshat:...banda khane ki jhooti offer hi mar deta hai (he comes near the dining table)
sujal:..tu bina offer walon mein se hai....(giggles)
akshat:...mama..isse samjha dein....mein yahan khana khane nahi ata
sujal:..acha???...to aur kya karne aya hai?...zara humein bhi bata....(he looks at him)
akshat:..mein....woh.....
sujal:..tu...woh??? (hides his smile)
akshat:..dekh sujal...
sujal:...haan...dekha naa....(and laughs)
veena:..aray bus bhi karo tum dono....
kashish:...ayi na...(tells akshat to join them)
akshat:..nahi...(looks at sujal)..bhabie....phri kabhie...mein to yahan yeh dene aya tha

(he shows the tickets to sujal..sujal was about to hold them...when akshat snatches them
back)....
akshat:..chal chal...tere liye nahi hai
sujal:..aaak.....(before he could complete...akshat kashish keh paas jata hai)

akshat:..apki shaadi peh nahi asaka tha...isiliye yeh raha shaadi ka toofa (smiles)
kashish:..yeh kya hai?
akshat:..khol keh dekhiye
kashish smiles and takes the packet....opens it and is shocked...her smile vanishes..lolx

kashish:..tickets....?
sujal looks at kashish....

veena:..kis cheez keh tickets?
akshat:...in keh honey mooon keh....
sujal smiles....
akshat sits down:..ab bhook lagi hai...(starts to eat)...lolx
while kashish stands stilll with the tickets...totally pareshan....sujal watches her...

..............

ok guys..comments plsssh ...thank you everyone...who commented luv ya all....and sorry
for not writing yesterday lolxx....

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