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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

very nice OS, read both the parts in one go.

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punyashree

@punya25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Beautiful update..
Do continue 😳

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

wow that nurse sure gave it to him
he so needed to be told off
man i wonder whats gonna happen next
so she dont want him to know of her pregnancy huh

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

why the CVs dont have these passionate ideas?

Loved it...

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Vaishu

@arnavandkhushi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: craziefan
Loved it...hope something like this happens in our show, though I have no expectation from the CVS.

Agreed! IF writers have more talent than the CVs.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

This was beautiful!

Simply beautiful!

Thank you!

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

That was so beautifully written!

And I really did like the feisty nurse :P

But I wonder why Khushi is still so reluctant even tho she now knows that the boy isn't Arnav's?

Great update! Continue soon (:

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Great update! Please Pm me!

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@Tish_Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Gud one! Cn I xpect part 3?

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

part 1
awesome...
so the kid is not Arnav's...
poor Khushi...

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