Arhi DARK SS:Bleeding heart LINK for th#2 on pg132 - Page 63

Originally posted by: adorablerujul

I hope in future updates we will some progress of story rather than another rape scene. If you think that most of reader read the story because of that cheap entertainment the you are sadly mistaken lady so please do show some progress to the story rather than another rape scene.

And please do justice to Khushi and punish Arnav severely. If you cannot than please do not continue.

Originally posted by: hrideyy

<font size="6">u just shut up... if u dont wanna read dont but plzzz stop demotivating others... understood</font>

Originally posted by: adorablerujul

you want read more about rape scene rather than the actual story? Why?

Motivate her? To what? So she can write more rape to pleasure you or copy someone else is story like she did before?

For me you are not less than those who involved in Delhi gang rape, they raped an innocent girl to death and do not feel regretting about it...who took pleasure in torturing someone you want the same... Let Arnav rape Khushi and you will get pleasure from that right...disgusting...and you call your self man...

Originally posted by: adorablerujul

you want read more about rape scene rather than the actual story? Why?

Motivate her? To what? So she can write more rape to pleasure you or copy someone else is story like she did before?

For me you are not less than those who involved in Delhi gang rape, they raped an innocent girl to death and do not feel regretting about it...who took pleasure in torturing someone you want the same... Let Arnav rape Khushi and you will get pleasure from that right...disgusting...and you call your self man...

so its contunued update next part soon

and u should show arnav repntance alot

Originally posted by: hrideyy

see its a fiction only not real soo plzzz dont use such kind of words... If u r saying this sooo i am sorry but u r a dumb person who takes fiction as a reality its only a piece of writing
if u dont want to read soo dont but plzzz dont read
goo and write ur own fiction...
Thank you,
for increasing some pages of d thread
byee

Originally posted by: adorablerujul

I do understand the difference between fiction and reality.
I also know that the story also has other aspects rather than just one thing which was there consistently for 10 updates. So I wanted to see some progress towards the story such Arnav getting some kind of hints regarding truth rather than him abusing Khushi. What is wrong with that?but the writer does not want to progress the story...it seems that way... If you see comments from other readers they also want Arnav to find out truth soon and repent badly rather than the torture of innocent Khushi. If they are asking this is ok but when I am asking the same saying it bluntly is demotivating? How?

Also she did copy some parts of other ff into this one that is truth. If she has guts to copy then she should be prepared to face it. If I am wrong then what was the reason for her to discontinue the story? If she did not copy and story had some progress the she would not had to discontinue. I give monkeys about copying issue but I do like to see something different in this update rather than another rape of Khushi...