Arhi DARK SS:Bleeding heart LINK for th#2 on pg132

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys I am Hira. I am here with a new Idea so please guys let me know
what you think of this idea. Is my Second SS on Arhi so if u
don't like it please tell me that. I try to update every week but if couldn't then I'm busy with some work. Please excuse me for being late.
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Author's note:
"I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u".
If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME.



Her black hair flew over her eyes which were filled with tears...She glanced over the medical report who was showing positive result She was pregnant...She was carrying his child in her womb...
She was feeling helpless what will she do now???If Arnav Singh Raizada comes to know about her pregnancy What will happened than???
she was lost in her thoughts,thinking about her life which was like hell for her after her forced marriage to Arnav
She was not more than a Mistress to him,who sactified him on bed.And nothing else..
Slapping her was is usuall routine,over a minor mistake he treat her like a criminal..who have no right to live a peacefull life..
Her family broke each and every relation with her after her forced marriage...Raizada's doesnt talk to her..She was suffering like hell...She didnt have anyone to cry her heart out...
From past three months she drop all hopes of living She doesnt eat well doesnt sleep well her dark circles under her eyes telling the truth of her miserable life but no have gut to ask her what happening with her...
Every night of these three months was like horrible nights for her..
She doent even know the reason behind all this torture which was given to her in these dayz..She doesnt know her fault whose punishment was given to her now a dayz..
Khushi singh raizada never fell so helpless rather today...
she does not know the route where to go or where not...

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THREAD#1
Prologue
Chapter 1
Teaser
Chapter2
Chapter3
Teaser

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sam88 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting story line ... u changed the name

Edited by sam88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept.. looking forward to it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reserved


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Damm am late. .😡

i always like to read dark side of ASR,and pregnant Khushi,you know it hira!
thanks for another dark ff!i love suspence . .😃
am lookin forward to it,thanks for the pm,continue soon. .
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Edited by trivedishraddha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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have edited my comment dear,be ready to get tortured by my pms!
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good 👍🏼 luck for your new ss. .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice but plzz make sure that arnav will regret what he has done to khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting prologue...will be waiting for part 1 eagerly...Happy Writing 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking Forward For More :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Hira...
interesting concept, plz do continue...
would like to know the reason behind Arnav's rash behaviour.
tc, love
JIA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Actually i have nothing to say

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