Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120

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nj.123

@nj.123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Just read both the chapters! Absolutely LOVED them...Akash needs to let go of his childish behavior and my respect and admiration for Arnav has just doubled over after reading the previous update, very well written and I'm glad that Khushi is not denying the fact that she loves him and he affects her intensely. Wonder who Jeeny is...😃

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tanurocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

absolutely wonderful chapet. its really nice to see the progression in their relationship. they are arried for aksh- and payal. but we can only see the beauty and charm in arshi's marriage.

btw who is jenny? another player by shyam?

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Lily

@NallyLilyLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

WHAT THE? 😲 Who's this Jenny now? 😲 I swear these past women in Arnav's life will give me hypertension! 😆

On a better note...AN UPDATE! Thanks so much for updating, lord knows I wait for DR updates with bated breathe! 😳

PS the media room has got to be one of my fav scenes, pls give us some more of those! 😃

Great work hun and I can't wait for your next update...although I am already not liking this Jenny person! 😡😆

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tina

@cpervaiz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

what!! first ria now this jenny... how many more. i'm pretty sure shyam is gonna take advantage of this. just hate his guts
loved.arhi's scenes
can't wait to read more
thanx for the pm:)

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panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Thanks for the PM
What a beautiful chapter
I love how the story is progressing slowly but surely, Arnav seems like a decent, decisive and genuine person.
Wonder if he knows about Shyam???

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Charlotte,

Your FF came recommended to me by a few folks and might I say, recommendation so so well deserved.

I loved your version of Arnav and Khushi - So much closer to the show I fell in love with.

I loved how you so cleverly used a few IPK sequences and sub-plot lines so much more effectively in the story

I loved your painting of Rajasthan - just as beautiful, mystic and mesmerizing as I remember.

Great work! Look forward to reading more of this!

Cheers

Meera

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Absolutely brilliant part. Arnav is right. Akash is too immature to handle any responsibility. Waiting to read more.

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fafizz

@fafizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Beautiful update.looking forward to read more from u

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

So much progress. They are both starting to build a relationship with each other, trust is there and now respect for each other both work and personal is there. Love the underlying passion. She is so much in love with him and he sure feels something. Will be fun to see his progress towards love...I hope.

Shyam is just evil. It will be enjoyable to see him 'outed'.

I thought Arnav was so smart to engineer the situation where mami was leaving on a visit, Akash and Payal were on a quasi working honeymoon in Delhi and then here comes Jenny...who is she?

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: meera30
Charlotte,

Your FF came recommended to me by a few folks and might I say, recommendation so so well deserved.

I loved your version of Arnav and Khushi - So much closer to the show I fell in love with.

I loved how you so cleverly used a few IPK sequences and sub-plot lines so much more effectively in the story

I loved your painting of Rajasthan - just as beautiful, mystic and mesmerizing as I remember.

Great work! Look forward to reading more of this!

Cheers
Meera

Hi Meera,

Thank you for reading Desert Rose and giving me such beautiful comment.

I have been an admirer of you work. Sorry I don't remember the name but the FF in which A and K are childhood friends who separate due to a MU and then meet years later at Akash's wedding when Khushi is hired as the wedding planner was a beautiful story. More beautiful than that was the way wrote the story itself.

So when I saw your comment I was like 😃