Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120 - Page 19

Absolutely amazing ... A new entry ... Interesting

loved it

Offo, now whose this jenny?

A jam-packed chapter! It's lovely to see Arnav and Khushi working together and Arnav actually apologized for his misconceptions - I didn't expect that for a while :) Arnav looking out for Khushi, remembering her fear of darkness, arranging for Mami to be away - he may not be in love but he certainly cares for her. Part of me wishes that Khushi had just blurted out that she loved him instead of keeping it in but I also appreciate that it's not quite yet time for declarations of that magnitude. They are both scared and they both still have misconceptions of each other's motives - and that honestly makes the journey that they will take to each other (hopefully) even more enjoyable.
I think the mention of fate is an interesting one - is it really fate or just circumstance. I like the idea of fate better honestly but I'm unsure if it's true.
Oh Shyam - hasn't the time come to let go of old grudges - to still be jealous of Arnav? But jealousy can lead to some desperate actions - and hopefully his desperation will lead to his fall.
Lastly, this chapter's "ahem ahem" was particularly lovely - because it wasn't borne out of anger or pain, just pure desire and attraction and I liked that Khushi made the first move - more of these, please ;)

Wuz dis Jenny????

I'm curious

Awesome update

oh what a lovely update.
perfect pace, so much happened in this one part only, the constant physical interaction between arnav and khushi gives me goosebumps, the idea of them sharing a mutual understanding for each others desires makes me shiver. oh sooo good.

I am glad khushi is maintaining safe distance from creepy shyam jeejaji.

also arnavs apology melted my heart, the confrontation about her profession, about the admission of arnav being impulsive about his opinion of khushi, absolutely beautiful

what a marvellous update

loved the update..
the way their are getting close to each other.,its really cute to read..thanks for pm.
update soon

Wow full of butterflies and god knows what else...
And please please please don't make us wait for another chapter for like a week cause its hard... I stalk your story twice everyday: once in the afternoon and then at night and it was damn difficult the last week when you didn't update...
Anyway brill chapter and hoping to read chapter 20 on Saturday if not tonight or tomorrow...

Lovely update... This is fast turning out to be my favourite fiction of the month :)