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Posted: 12 years ago
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(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 8

Guys I m not a very good writer so I m sorry if there are any mistakes and thankx for the comments on my last update and sorry if I have missed someone to PM''. Hope you like this chapter'..ENJOY😊

Chapter 8:😊

Swayam and Sharon went to do the work'..but on the way Sharon is thinking about what is she going to tell Swayam about work because they don't have any work to do''
Swayam: Sharon waise don't need to worry I know we don't have any work to do.
Sharon: tumhe kaise pata ki Maine jhoot bhola.
Swayam: kyunki tumhare chehre par saaf dikh raha tha kit um jalan ho rahi ho.
Sharon: ( blushes) ☺️Sharon Rai prakash aur jealous'..no ways.
Swayam: really now'.
Swayam and Sharon start laughing and go and sit in the fire escape and they are remembering last's night.

*FLASHBACK BEGINS*

After swaron's convo they both were thinking about each other. Then Swaron was curious to know who called him samm because she was jealous and she knew that sandy called him bhai.
Sharon: (to herself) main itna kyun insecure bann rahi hoon mein jealous kyun hoon agar koyi ladki swayam ko samm bulati hai toh mujhe kyun farak pad raha hai. Kahi mein swayam se pya' nahi yeh kaise ho sakta hai mein rey se puchti hoon nahi nahi agar rey se puchungi toh sawaal pe sawaal karenga ise acha me kriya se puch leti hoon who aise mamlo mein experienced hai. Afterall she's a girl and is in a relationship with rey.

Sharon calls Kriya.
Phone convo:
Kriya: hello
Sharon: Hey Kriya Mujhe tumse kcuh puchna tha'
Kriya: aapko mujse?? Puchye'
Sharon: kriya meri ek friend hai New York mein woh kehrahiti shyaad use pyaar ho gaya kisi se par woh sure nahi hai.
Kriya: ohh toh mein kya help kar sakti hoon???
Sharon: tum mujsequestions pucho ki pyaar mein kya kya symptoms hote hai mein use puchlungi.
Kriya: woh kaise???
Sharon: who mein use landline par hold kiya hua hai ( lieing)
Kriya: apne use conference pe kyun nahi dala.
Sharon: ooohoo kriya tum kitne sawall puchti ho'.tum bas batao na.
Kriya: ok mein kuch sawall puchungi tum usi kaho ki sirf haan ya na kahe'ok??
Sharon: okk

The quiz begins.
Kriya: 1st question; tumari friend ko kya uske saath time bitana acha lagta hai??
Sharon: haan'.
Kriya: tum anser kar rahi ho.
Sharon: ( bits her tongue) nahi nahi kriya woh kya hai na who tumari awazz sun sakti hai to mujhe bata rahi hai aur mein uska answer repeat kar rahi hoon.
Kriya: ohh ok
Kriya: 2nd question; who kya uski bare mein sochti rehti hai??
Sharon: haan
Kriya: 3rd question; kya uske uske paas hone se use kushi milti hai??
Sharon: haan bohot'
Kriya: 4th question; kya agar who uske paas hota hai toh use kya aise feel hota hai ki duniya issi modd par taam jaye??
Sharon : haan
Kriya: 5th question; kya agar koyi aur ladki uske saath hoti hai toh kyat woh jealous hoti ho?
Sharon: haan
Kriya: 6th question kya use aisa lagta hai ki uspe sirf uska haqq hai aur aapne aap par uska?
Sharon: haan'.
Kriya: BINGO
Sharon: wat??? Matlab???
Kriya: Sharon your friend is in love.
Sharon: really?? Ok kriya I'll call u later bye.
Kriya: k bye.
phone convo ends.

Sharon: ( to herself) am I in love with swayam?❤️ ( blushing) ☺️yes I m in love with swayam
Sharon: Swayam Shekawat I love you. Mein kal swayam ko saab kuch bata dungi subah.


Swayam's place:
Swayam: mein uske bare mein itna kyun socta rehta hoon??? Kahin mein Sharon's se pyaar to nahi''..pehle rey ya kriya she pucta hoon'.nahi nahi who dono toh sawaal puchte rahenge''haan Vicky se pcuhta hoon who bhi ek relationship mein hai so'.yh good idea Vicky ko phone karta hoon.

Swayam calls Vicky.
phone convo
Vicky: hii dide.
Swayam: hey Vicky mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha??
Vicky: haan dude bolo.
Swayam: dude agar ek ladka Kisi ladki ke bare mein sochta rehta hai, uske liya concern rehta hai, uske saath time spend karna chahta hai, uske bina incomplete sa feel hota hai toh iska matlab kya hua???
Vicky: ( shocked) 😲haan par tu??
Swayam: nahi nahi yeh mere cousin ko ho raha hai'.aur usne kaha tha puchne keliye.
Vicky: haan dude yeh saab signs to us insaan ko hote hai jo uss ladki se pyaar karta hai'..mujhe neha se pyaar hua tha tab same aisa hi feel hua tha.
Swayam: sach???
Vicky: muuch.
Swayam: ok dude mein tumse baad mein bhaat karta hoon bye and thnkx dude.
Vicky: ok goodnight
Swayam: gudnite.
phone convo ends

Swayam: ( smiling) 😊I m in love with Sharon raiprakash.❤️ Kabhi socha nahi tha ki yeh ladhaai jagda will lead to love. Waise kehte hai na ladaai jagde hi pyaar ki pehli siddhi hoti hai'..toh mein kal Sharon ke paas jakar use sab kuch bata dunga'.nahi mujhse aur wait nahi hota hai mein Sharon se abhi baath karunga.

Sharon's house:
Sharon: ( smiling and blushing infront of the mirror)😊☺️
Sharon's phone start ringing. Sharon sees the caller ID and it was swayam by looking at the swayam name she starts blushing very hard. She picks the call.
Phone convo:
Sharon: hey ( blushing)☺️
Swayam: hii sharon tum mujhe abhi tumare ghar ke paas who jo park hai waha milo.
Sharon: Swayammm iss waqtt, ab kitni dher ho gayi hai'..aur who park toh jungle jaisa lagta hai aur raat ko mujhe daar lagta hai.
Swayam: Sharon tume abhi ana padega'
Sharon: par kyun???
Swayam: Kuch kehna hai bohot important hai.
Sharon: but swayam mujhe daar lagta hai'
Swayam: daro matt mein toh honga na waha aur waise bhi yum ghadi mein hi beti raho jab thak tumhe mein nahi dikh jaata.
Sharon: ( smiles)😊 ( kitna cutee hai) ok
Swayam: ok c u then aur darna maat.
Sharon: ok c u.
phone convo ends.

They reach the park and it was very dark sharon was scared. Just then saw swayam standing near the tree she feeled relaxed and was also blushing by looking at him'just then she goes near him.
Sharon: (calls from behind) swayam.
Swayam: (turns back) Sharon (smiles)😊 mujhe tumse kuch baath karni hai.
Sharon: haan swayam bolo na.
Swayam: Sharon mujhe tume yeh batana tha ki mein kisi ladki se pyaar karta hoon.
Sharon: (feels a bit low hearing that) konn hai who ladki ( sad) 😔
Swayam : woh na iss duniya ki sabse kubsoorat ladki hai
Sharon: ( hearing that a tear escaped from her eyes)😭
Swayam: uska naam hai'..
Another tear was rolling down from Sharon's cheek and she did'nt want to here any further so she turned and was about to leave. Swayam holds her wrist and stops her.
Swayam: uska naam Sharon rai prakash hai'..
Sharon: (shocked)😲 and turns and sees in swayam's dark chocolate brown eyes.
Swayam: Sharon I Love you❤️
Sharon start crying in happiness and her happiness had no limits. She goes and hugs 🤗Swayam as tight as possible.
Swayam hugs her back. That moment was just perfect. They felt so safe in each others arms.
Swayam: I love you Sharon❤️
Sharon: I love too Swayam❤️
Swayam breaks the hug and cups Sharon's face and wipes her tears.
Sharon: (blushing)☺️
Swayam: hayye tum jab blush karti ho na toh out of the world lagti ho.
Sharon: (blushing hard)☺️☺️w..w..woh mein blush nahi kar rahi'
Swayam: (teasing) toh kya gussa aa raha hai)
Sharon: kyun???
Swayam: (teasing)nahi who bass kisike cheeks lal tabhi hote hai jab koi blush karta hai ya phir gussa kar rahi ho tab.
Sharon: haan mein gussa hoon.
Swayam: kyun regret kar rahi ho ki tum ek weakling se pya'
Sharon: (stops him by keeping her hand on his mouth) aisa kabhi maat kehna swayam'..mein tumse pyaar karti hoon aur mein yeh bilkul bhi regret nahi kar rahi hoon. (sad because swayam said that)😔
Swayam: (😊 smiles and cups her face) hey baby chill mein aise mazaak kar raha tha tumne toh mujhe seriously le liya.
Sharon: smiles.😊
Swayam: aur waise Sharon raiprakash aur pyaar wyaar ki bhaate'..haa very impressive.
They both laugh''
Sharon rests her head on swayam chest and swayam kisses her on her forehead.
Swayam: sharon its very late i guess tumhe ghar jana chahiye'.
Sharon: haan I'll c u tomorrow in college..bye gud nte baby and gives him a peck on his cheek.
Swayam: mein tumhe drop kar deta hoon.
Sharon: No Swayam woh mera driver wait kar raha hai toh.
Swayam: ok bye baby'.(smiles and hugs her)😊🤗
Then they broke the hug and Swayam leaves Sharon till her car and she leaves and also goes to hid car drives his car off. Both of their cars were going in the same direction. But Swayam stopped at one shop because he needed to buy water so Sharon's car reaches further.

On the middle of the road Sharon's car breaks down.
Driver: maam lagta hai car ko repair karne ke liye mechanic ki zaroorat padegi'
Sharon: watt?? U mean jab tak yeh car theek nahi ho jaati tab tak mein yaha beech sadak pe akheli rahungi.
Driver: maam mein mechanic dund kar lata hoon tab tak app please yahi raho.
Sharon: tikhe'.jaldi mechanic ko lekhar aao.
Sharon was sitting inside then she comes out of the car to take some fresh air.
Some group of guys comes. Sharon could hear the footsteps'..she got scared but tried to behave normal.

Guy1: yeh ladki kitni hawwt hai.
Guy2: haan yaar aaj raat toh me iss ladki ke saath ki bithaunga.
Sharon: ( to herself)( cries)😭Swayam please mujhe bachao'.i need you.
Guys 2 and guy 3 tried to touch sharon.
Sharon moves backwards
Sharon: how dare you tumari itni himaat mein tumhara khoon kar dhoongi.
Guys3: hayy haayy itna gussa kyun meri jaan.
Sharon: tummm mein tumari jaan waan koyi nahi hu."
Guy 2 tries to cpme close to sharon just then someone had bitten him up on his head by the bamboo stick and the guy2 faints. And the someone was non other than swayam'. Sharon's swayam.
Sharon runs near swayam and hugs him and buried her face in his chest and was crying.
Swayam: hey sharon chup roh mat please.
Sharon: Swayam pata nahi agar tum nahi hote toh mera kya hota.
Swayam: sharon pehle rohna bandh karo abb mein aagaya hoon na.
Guy 1,3 & 4: abhe tu konsa naya character hai'
Swayam: agar tumnhe use haath lagane ki koshish bhi ki nah mein tumara muh todh doonga.
Guy 3: abe tu hota khon hain be hume damki dene ko'..yu uska kya BF lagta hai kya??
Swayam: mein iska jo bhi lagta hoon lekhin yeh mere liye bohot khass hai'.aur agar tumnhe isse haat lagane ki koshish ki na toh tum zindha nahi bachoge.
Guy1 & 3 takes the Guy 2 and leaves.

❤️Sharon hugs swayam and kisses her forehead.it starts raining. They were drenched in water swayam comes closer to sharon, sharon closes her eyes and he pulls sharon into a kiss'.sharon also responds back to the kiss and this kiss turned to a very passionate one swayam pulls sharon more close and deppened the kiss. They they broke apart for the lack of oxygen. Sharon was blushing very hard. Swayam smiles looking at Sharon.❤️
Swayam: I'm sorry'
Sharon: huh??
Swayam: I'm sorry sharon if I crossed my limits but I could'nt control'.sorry
Sharon: Swayam tumnhe koi limits cross nahi kiye hai'..aur aur ( she pulls swayam back and kisses him he kisses her back❤️) then they broke apart''.
Sharon: ab toh tumhe mera jawab mil gaya hoga.( blushes)☺️
Sharon: aur tum toh mere ghadi ke piche hi the na apni ghadi lekher to achanak kaha gayab ho gaye.
Swayam: Arrey woh pani lane gaya tha shop pe. isliye mein piche reh gaya. Sorry!!
Sharon: its ok (smiles)😊
Swayam:( smiles) 😊ok chalo Sharon let me drop you home now yeh jagaah safe nahi hai.
Sharon: haan chalo (and they sit in the car and drive off)
Sharon calls the driver and tells him to go home after the car is repaired. By the time sharon and swayam reach sharon's home.swayam gets out of the car and opens the door for sharon.
Swayam: (gives her a peck on her lips❤️) Sharon bye gud nite.
Sharon: gud nite.
Swayam: (smiles)😊
Sharon: Kal college me milte hai'..
Swayam: nahi Sharon meri kal kise ke saath date hai'..mein collge nahi aaunga.
Sharon: watt???( hits him on his chest)
Swayam: (holds her by her waist ) are baby just kidding.
Sharon: (smiles)😊 toh swayam kya hume humare friends ko abhi bata dena chahiye humare relationship ke bare mein.
Swayam: I guess hume abhi keliye secret rakna chahiye aur sahi waqtt ane pe bata dena chahiye.
Sharon: I guess your right haan aur haan abhi sab log footloose ko lekhe bohot disturbed hai.
Swayam: ok toh humara relationship ek secreat hai.
Sharon: (smiles) 😊
Sharon: haan aur mujhe ghar pochke phone karna.
Swayam: ok my dear GF.
Sharon: (blushes)☺️
Swayam: ( smiles) 😊
Sharon: ( gives him a pech on his lips) bye gud nite.
Swayam: bye gud nite sweet dreams about me.
Sharon: sure I will. (Smiles)😊
Swayam gets back in the car and leaves.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Sharon: waise swayam mein tumse bohot gussa hoon.( acting angry)😡
Swayam: kyun???
Sharon: hum kal raat itni dher se saath the aur tumnhe mujhe nuts ke bhaare mein nahi bataya.
Swayam: Arrey mein kissi aur ladki ke bare mein baath karke tumara mood karaab nahi karna chahta tha. ( smiles)😊
Sharon: (rests her head on his shoulder)
Swayam: I love you Sharon!!❤️
Sharon: I love you too❤️'( smiles and blushes)😊☺️


Guys how was it good bad wors, hope you enjoyed it and if there were any mistakes I'm sorry''.please comment'..thenkx for reading.😊

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
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Awesome update
Ye kya swaron r already in relationship
Flashback was awesome
Swaron confession 😳 .swayam fighting for sharon n then their first kiss 😳
Waiting for next part
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awww...cute confession!!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue to do so!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

awesum...

i read all parts in a go...

waiting for next part... do pm me plz


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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awesome...update was nice...u have perfectly included the flashback...n luved how swayam was teasing her when she was jealous...finally u made them confess yipeee...n thnx for pm...n continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luvd the update it was just SwaRon!

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WOW...loved the confession part...so cute...action,drama,hero ne heroine ko bachaya...then the kisss...mind blowing ..loved it ..plz update soon dear 😊
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Sab chupe rushtam hain yahan :P Maine socha ab drama hoga par yahan pe to sab sher pae sawa sher hain. Drama to pehle hi ho chuka tha :) Lovely update. Nicely done confession sequence.
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(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 9

Guys I m so sorry for posting the chapter so late'.hope you like it'.thnkx for the lovely comments guys on the previous chapter.😊

Chapter 9:😊

Swaron were spending some quality time with each other, suddenly Swayam's phone starts to ring, and the caller ID is nuts. Sharon also peeps into swayam's phone to check the caller ID but unfortunately Swayam sees her and hides it from her just to tease her. Sharon was shocked, and got angry.

Sharon:(angry)😡 mujshe kyun chupa rahe ho??? Konn hai??
Swayam: ( teasing)😆 aur mein tumhe kyun batayu???
Sharon: ab mein tumari GF hoon, pura hakkk hai mera jaane ka ki tumhe kisne call kiya hai.
Swayam: ok, ye lo check kar lo.
Sharon: ( sees the caller ID) watt? Yeh tumhe kyun call kar rahi hai???( angry & jealous)😡
Swayam: oii hoiii koyi jealous ho raha hai??
Swayam picks the call,
phone convo:
Swayam: haan nuta bolo'.
Nuts: Tum abhi ke abhi ghar aa jao'
Swayam: Kyun???
Nuts: tumari grandma new York se wapas aa gayi hai aur uncle aunty bhi aagye hai.
Swayam: sach ( swayam's happiness had no limits😃😃) mein abhi aa raha hoon.
Sharon became sad because he told nuts that he is coming home, and swayam could clearly see that she was upset.
Swayam: nuta who kya hain na mein aur sharon hum dono kaam kar rahe the toh mein use bhi lekhar aata hoon.
Sharon: ( shocked😲 and happy 😃a smiles crept on her face)
Swayam: tikhe hum ate hain ok bye nuts.
Nuts: wait wait''dekho tum use lekhar aa rahe ho tho please use Indian clothes mein lana kyunki tumari grandmom ko western pasand nahi hain na isliye.
Swayam: ok tum uski fikar maat karo.
Nuts: ok bye.
Swayam: bye.
phone convo ends:

Swayam: sharon chalo lets go''aaj mein tume meri grandmom se milata hoon.
Sharon: ( shocked)😲 watt??
Swayam: Arrey don't worry mein une bata dunga kit um meri dost ho'.
Sharon: par kya who mujhe pasand toh karenge na?? ( tensed)
Swayam: haan'.lekin tumhe iskiliye kuch karna padega.
Sharon: kya???
Swayam: tumhe india kapde pehne honge.
Sharon: par mera pass toh Indian kapde hain hi nahi.
Swayam: arrey tum chinta maat karo hum pehle shopping kar lenge tumare liye india clothes karid lenge and baad mein ghar jayenge.
Sharon: Awww baby your such a sweetheart.
Swayam: I knw I knw ( smiling attitude)😃
Sharon: (gives him a peck on his lips and hugs him🤗)
Swayam: ( hugs her back🤗) kya baath hai aaj yum bohot romantic mood mein ho.
Sharon: ( blushes) ab chale.
Swayam: haan haan.
they both leave for shoping they buy a Indian salwar suit for sharon. Sharon goes to the changing room to wear it, she comes out wearing the salwar suit and he looked gorgeous in it. Swayam just could'nt take his eyes off her.


Swayam: you look amazing.
Sharon: really???
Swayam: offcourse.
Sharon: lets go
Swayam: yh they reach at swayam's house.
Sharon: ( tensed)
Swayam: Sharon tension maat lo aur waise bhi grandmom ko toh hum batayege ki hum dost hai na'
Sharon: haan but agar mera first impression bad ho gaya toh who mujhe tumari life mein kabhi expect nahi karengi.
Swayam: ohhh hhooo sharon tum kuch zyada hi soch rahi hoo..
Sharon: Sab thik toh hoga na Swayam???
Swayam: haan baby sab thik hoga( he hugs her)🤗
Sharon: ( hugs him back)🤗
then they broke the hug and entered the house.
Sandy, nuts, and swayam's mom were surprised to see Sharon in india attire.
Sharon: hi aunty, hi sandy,hey Natasha.
Swayam's mom: hi Sharon''you look beautiful in Indian attire.
Sandy: yh really you look awesome.
Sharon: thnkx😊
Nuts: c'mon swayam sharon first meet Grandmom and then you guys can do your CS and ACS work.
Swayam: yaa'lets go sharon.
Sharon and swayaam walk towards swayam's grandmom's room. Sharon on the way praying to god '' GOD PLEASE MAKE SURE KI MIEN SWAYAM KI GRANDMOM KO PASAND AAU PLEASE.''


ok guys that's it for this chapter and hope you enjoyed it if they were any typing mistakes then m sorry''plz comment.😊

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Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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AWWW...such a cute update...jealous sharon is gold...loved the indian attire part...plz plz update soon dear 👏👏👏
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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