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Posted: 13 years ago
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Indeed, they are truly partners in crime ahafha.. I can't believe that they have been married for. A year and no one knows..haha..
Oh I love how they talk about their shy siblings Lmao!! Lovely OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Amazing. Why you write so good???
What if this happened in the show? Let's just take a minute to think *stares into space* *BAM!! slapped in the face by reality*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
cute one
arhi's secret marriage
thanx for the pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awww Truly a veryy sweet OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
This OS was lovely as well as very funny.I enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
hey...another beautiful OS by you... very naughty one too😉 enjoyed reading it... love the writing and language style.. as usual the title is perfect... and cute...

i really in love with the below sentences,,, i found them cute/lovely... enjoy reading them..
  • "Yes, have I not seen you two discussing"
  • volley between Federer and Nadal.
  • "Only a witch would marry you" ---- "When did I say I would marry you?"
  • "no escaping me, witch"😆
  • "Then get that thick skulled brother of yours to marry my equally dumb witted sister"
  • I can only hope Payal does not reach menopause before he beds her"
  • "We should get them to kiss first"
  • One crime at a time partner, one crime at a time"
😆 i guess u have unique qualities... in "IPOL"- u handled well with the relations and office environment. in "It was always you" - about the orphan and doc profession and

this one u showed interest in games...
overall the OS is very entertaining... keep writing... thank you... 😊






Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
kushi and her crazy plans😆
awsum and cute os...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awesome os ...
loved it...
you should continue it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
OMG!

*thud*

*dead*

*faint*

*revived*

I love your Arnav so damn sexaayy! Here's my favourite part:

"Only a witch would marry you" Khushi added, with an eyebrow raised sardonically.

"When did I say I would marry you?" he asked


And this:

"Oh come on Di, Khushi and I hardly fight, we agree to disagree on many matters"

The sizzle, the chemistry, the Arnav-Khushi have a secret and the partnering - all there! Awesome job!





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love this os. I wish you continue writing this and convert it onto a ss. I am reading all your os. Don'tknow how I missed reading them.

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