OS: Partners in Crime

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww sho cute... How do u write so well.. U should start publishing ur works..just change the character names...so no copyright issues.. Because ur stories are not similar to ipk track..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was a super cute one K! loved it...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved the concept! Super cute, loved the little "discussions" and of course the romance, and of course Khushi's crazy ideas 😆
U should add another part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww such adorable partners in crime☺️. They have been married for nearly a year and have actually been successful in keeping their relationship inconspicuous. Honestly loved the exasperation of the legally married couple at the relationship progress of their siblings while they cannot wait any longer.
Edited by svj2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗

And I love you for this. Truly.
Could not stop smiling, grinning, whatever.
I am still smiling and everybody around is asking why i am smiling at the computer.

Happy navarathri to you as well.
*sigh* I have to keep 'Golu' and I am tired just thinking about it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. As I was reading itself, I kept thinking, thank god you wrote this, the other one was too much at the top of my mind. And when I came to the end, I was stunned at your lovely gesture.

Thanks again. 😃
Edited by serialwatcher16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a refreshingly new concept.. married secretly, and planning another... Loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

🤗

And I love you for this. Truly.
Could not stop smiling, grinning, whatever.
I am still smiling and everybody around is asking why i am smiling at the computer.

Happy navarathri to you as well.
*sigh* I have to keep 'Golu' and I am tired just thinking about it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. As I was reading itself, I kept thinking, thank god you wrote this, the other one was too much at the top of my mind. And when I came to the end, I was stunned at your lovely gesture.

Thanks again. 😃

Anytime dear, I was sad to have made everyone read that and wanted to cheer them with this.
About the gesture...you know I like you...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Aha, what a wicked OS! Somebody's all secretly married and is now planning another mrriage!
Aakash and Payal's wits are funny.

"menopause before beds her!" Bwahahah!

Lovely OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was a riot Kalyani ... cant stop laughing ... 😆 😆 😆

this is one mad couple ... height of desperation ... hahahaha
Trust Aakash and Payal to be so laid back ...
"If he takes this long to propose, I can only hope Payal does not reach menopause before he beds her"
Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was crazy,wicked..romantic.. Loved it.

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