OS: Partners in Crime - Page 5

LOVED this OS! Light hearted, charming and naughty :D And I like this independent, bold and fun Khushi!

Omg it was just brilliant... Khushi's eagerness to get Payal and Akash married made me laugh... Arnav and Khushi made a perfect couple and u r an amazing writer for writing everything so brilliantly.

Originally posted by: latekate

Thank you Kalyaani 😃 and lots of 🤗

I know i am late (hectic work day)

Happy Navratri

@Usha Just checked what Golu is? Is it simmilar to Bommalakoluvu? That reminds me of my childhood.

very cute!!! loved it! its nice to see them in different roles in your writing!!

Loved the OS...Seriously,You should publish your works dear...Many a times, I felt why don't these so called CV's take a look at your work for inspiration...Some of your OS would be smashing as an episode of tere mere love stories...Thanks for the PM. I should better say, I am proud to be your fan.

Partners in crime, apt title!

I have two tabs open for your story.

One one I am reading. And on the other I am typing this comments as I am reading. These are more or less my thoughts:

Oh they are married! Looks like a naughty OS to me.

They fight blatantly and flirt discreetly in front of their family... Interesting!

Wait! What? Huh? They are married and the family doesn't know? Hawww!

Arnav indirectly calls her a witch and she winks knowing he can't wink back. Typical ArHi always trying to best each other.

Giggle. Giggle. Giggle. Arnav is desperate to meet her, punish her. Giggle.

Ohhh they are physical and comfortable physical. But why hide their love and marriage?

ArHi discussing PayAsh. SusSEX discussing Siberia. Hehehehheeh

Why can't ArHi marry before PayAsh???

Crazy plan. Crazy Khushi.

Owww... Fashion designer meets interior designer...

One sec. They got married first and then planted the seeds of romance in their respective siblings' hearts for their benefit. Wicked!

I hope their plan succeeds and they marry and have loads of cute babies.

You Arnav is quite a biter...

wow an amazing idea...nyc os :)

lovely.. Happy Navarathri to all!!

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I have two tabs open for your story.

One one I am reading. And on the other I am typing this comments as I am reading. These are more or less my thoughts:

Oh they are married! Looks like a naughty OS to me.

They fight blatantly and flirt discreetly in front of their family... Interesting!

Wait! What? Huh? They are married and the family doesn't know? Hawww!

Arnav indirectly calls her a witch and she winks knowing he can't wink back. Typical ArHi always trying to best each other.

Giggle. Giggle. Giggle. Arnav is desperate to meet her, punish her. Giggle.

Ohhh they are physical and comfortable physical. But why hide their love and marriage?

ArHi discussing PayAsh. SusSEX discussing Siberia. Hehehehheeh

Why can't ArHi marry before PayAsh???

Crazy plan. Crazy Khushi.

Owww... Fashion designer meets interior designer...

One sec. They got married first and then planted the seeds of romance in their respective siblings' hearts for their benefit. Wicked!

I hope their plan succeeds and they marry and have loads of cute babies.

You Arnav is quite a biter...