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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Happy navarathri to you as well...
This is really cute .. I have a stupid grin on my face even now after reading this. They were secretly mrd for n year now and they only brought Payal n Akash together so that their line could be clear. I just love these two. Truly partner in crime. 😆
It's fresh and completely different from whatever is happening in the show ...
Thank you for this..

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

i LOVED it!!! honestly, i feel like jumping up in joy reading this OS. it's like an aha-a moment... really refreshing story! great job!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Absolutely fabulous OS.. you have to make it a SS. please please pretty please.. i love the concept and it is pretty good.. please please make it a SS.. i would love to see them play cupid for payash and not only that getting caught by anji or the family that would be coool...

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LibranAngel

@libranangel

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

brilliant kalyani!!!! love the last line!!!!

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Azzmaira

@kookoo864

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Loved it, it was so entertaining!
Thanks for pm!

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Happy Navratri Kalyaani.
You should seriously think about getting your works published - they are that good.
Arnav and Khushi are secretly married and hence their cladenstine meetings...the flirting, the teasing, Arnav marking Khushi - I have butterflies in my tummy doing a happy zumba.
And what a plan to get Akash ans Payal together, imagine them watching an ahem ahem movie together...when Arnav and Khushi have already done the deeds...there goes my gutter mind.
Darling, you are a genius...keep writing like this...this is bliss..
Would you consider adding more to this...please...