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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy navarathri to you as well...
This is really cute .. I have a stupid grin on my face even now after reading this. They were secretly mrd for n year now and they only brought Payal n Akash together so that their line could be clear. I just love these two. Truly partner in crime. 😆
It's fresh and completely different from whatever is happening in the show ...
Thank you for this..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i LOVED it!!! honestly, i feel like jumping up in joy reading this OS. it's like an aha-a moment... really refreshing story! great job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Absolutely fabulous OS.. you have to make it a SS. please please pretty please.. i love the concept and it is pretty good.. please please make it a SS.. i would love to see them play cupid for payash and not only that getting caught by anji or the family that would be coool...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant kalyani!!!! love the last line!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, it was so entertaining!
Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy Navratri Kalyaani.
You should seriously think about getting your works published - they are that good.
Arnav and Khushi are secretly married and hence their cladenstine meetings...the flirting, the teasing, Arnav marking Khushi - I have butterflies in my tummy doing a happy zumba.
And what a plan to get Akash ans Payal together, imagine them watching an ahem ahem movie together...when Arnav and Khushi have already done the deeds...there goes my gutter mind.
Darling, you are a genius...keep writing like this...this is bliss..
Would you consider adding more to this...please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kalyani,

Lovely work...do continue in part 2 and let us know whether Arshi succeed in their plan :))
So maybe the family discovers their secret and reacts ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow,ths was just superb 👏

Loved it 😳
U r an amazing writer,dear.. Can we get another chapter to ths? 😛

A very happy navrathri to u as well 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Awesome ..so cute..Loved the .Patners n crime...

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