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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Thank you, D, for the amazing update! I literally had goosebumps while reading the update, and I'm pretty sure the temperature dropped quite a few degrees. My mind is sort of numb, right now.

It almost feels like it was harder for Arnav to leave KH than for Kashi. But that's just the magic of the house, I guess.

I haven't heard the music, but I'll as soon as I get the chance.

Thank you once again, D!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

awe so they left ...hope the curse is no longer valid...fab update...continue soon...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

the house continues to enthrall. the figure in the window, the uncharacteristic fog.

even as this chapter was about khushi and the house, i had to focus of arnav.

his chest pain, he feels her pain.

the woman in the window, the latest in the mystical happenings this week

but the thing that stood out for me, he sat in the front not next to her, giving her space. it takes a true gentleman to do that and not smother her with his care and concern.

glad she went with him. hope she listens to him as well

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san123456

@san123456

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

she's leaving!! poor Kashi, she loved the house so much.

Who was the women by the window? i'm curious.

Amazing update, very eerie and spooky.

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sandani12

@sandani12

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

I love it when you update! But honestly that was spooky! I'm not sure if I understand what the fog represents! Or if it even supposed to represent something.

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Beautiful update... You weave magic with the words and I could actually imagine house shrouded in fog, darkness and the lone light ...

Does the change in physical appearance of Khusi indicate that she is ready to leave the past here and start afresh. Arnav rubbing is left side ... In this short period only he has got attached to the house.

Was that Devaki on the window !!!

Glad that both of them are leaving together and hope will remain together in future too

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Once again you took my breath away with your writing. It was just such a setting and mood that you set, that I just want more. Thank you for the update

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

What a gripping way of writing you have... more than the story - its your story telling that holds one..

my only crib - longer chapters, please?? please????

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

part 50
awesome part...
so Arnav is taking Kashi with him...
who was that person by the window? Pallavi?
poor Kashi...
cont soon dear...

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Felt sad at the when I read that the KH was finally shielded from the view as
Arnav and Kashi drew away from it.

Who was by the window?because that was really spooky.

Great update.