MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#2 link THREAD 3 - Page 50

nice part
geet was really an idiot in past
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Geet had hurted him so much!
He had worked so hard to prove himself...to achive wat his father wanted him to! And she just ruined everything with her one lie! Showing everyone that he is nothing without her...putting a question mark on his caliber, talent & hardwork!
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And all this for wat??
...just for her ego n in influence of her ''good for nothing...so called friends"...who didnt even had the guts to voiced their opinion...if they felt she was doing wrong!
...who infront of her were criticizing maan to please her...but were very egar to grab him...as soon as she lives him!
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If only, she had one true friend...she wouldnt hav done that mistake of hurting an innocent heart...
...coz she did felt wrong lieing like that...taking sumones hardworks credit like that...but her so called friends overpowerd her consious ...and if sumone would hav tried to stop her...she wouldnt hav done that...thats wat i feel.
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unkown to herself...she was changing...thoda thoda...
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She had broken the image of "his mishti" at every step...
Even when his heart wanted to get lost in his mishty...she made sure with her deeds/actions...that his mind will remind him...that she is not "his mishty"...but Geet handa!
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He had come only coz of his moms words...and she again made him regrat for that!
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The day, when he should hav been the happiest person...proud for his first sucess...his first step to his goal...
...she changed that in a bitter memory for him...humiliating him...denying his hardwork!

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Anu my heart is crying and i am so disturbed after this update...i know u had mentioned this party reference before also and even then I dreaded reading it...

akele mein jo kuch ho, sabke saamne jab rishton ki insult hoti hai then pain is at a different level...

Pata nahi mera dil kiske liye ro raha hai... for Maan who has been humiliated...for Geet who knows she is wrong and is paying for it now...for maan who may have everything now but doesn't have his dream or his love...zindagi mein iske siwaye hai bhi kya

pata nahi but feeling so sad...I am so tempted to save myself from emotional distress and not read this FF for few updates till it become a little lighter and there is some hope but then that will not be fair...pata nahi bas bahut chubta hai...it's every chapter drowns me emotionally...

you have never had me so affected before...but now i know the remedy to cure myself. I am going to read "u never know" again...that will bring my smile back 😊

Dear Ritzy,

chi this geet is sooo bad she deserve a bigg punishment i hate her 😡

@anu di i read ur reply to ritzy di comment

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Geet had hurted him so much!
He had worked so hard to prove himself...to achive wat his father wanted him to! And she just ruined everything with her one lie! Showing everyone that he is nothing without her...putting a question mark on his caliber, talent & hardwork!
...
And all this for wat??
...just for her ego n in influence of her ''good for nothing...so called friends"...who didnt even had the guts to voiced their opinion...if they felt she was doing wrong!
...who infront of her were criticizing maan to please her...but were very egar to grab him...as soon as she lives him!
...
If only, she had one true friend...she wouldnt hav done that mistake of hurting an innocent heart...
...coz she did felt wrong lieing like that...taking sumones hardworks credit like that...but her so called friends overpowerd her consious ...and if sumone would hav tried to stop her...she wouldnt hav done that...thats wat i feel.
...
...
unkown to herself...she was changing...thoda thoda...
...
...
She had broken the image of "his mishti" at every step...
Even when his heart wanted to get lost in his mishty...she made sure with her deeds/actions...that his mind will remind him...that she is not "his mishty"...but Geet handa!
...
...
He had come only coz of his moms words...and she again made him regrat for that!
...
The day, when he should hav been the happiest person...proud for his first sucess...his first step to his goal...
...she changed that in a bitter memory for him...humiliating him...denying his hardwork!

100% apt analysis dear...

Originally posted by: abinash079

@anu di i read ur reply to ritzy di comment

di plz dont finish the past in one update want to know the detail things that happen

i know di it is painfull but still want to ead it coz i know by that i could see the amout of pain maan faced in past

so di will request u not to complete the past in one update by just giving overview ok di

show how maan started going away from his father emotionally and what his father state was at that time everything

i hope u consider this di😊

Don't worry dear i will give all the deatil..

Originally posted by: tellyme

Dear Ritzy,

you made me emotional by your comments. In this FF I never feel so emotional but your guys comment makes me more emotional.

trust me dear, i never wanted to make this FF emotional one, only this whole story was in mind and I just type the part of story but it's coming out so painfull. I am sorry dear but don't quit reading.

Loosing you as a reader will be great loss for me. I have already decided, Now I will wrap the past in just one update. Will give quick background of what happened and how the seperated and how her heart started changing and rest any past if comes will come very little with present just as reference.

but one update is needed.

next two update anyhow is complete present... i don't garanty it won't be painful but it is present...

Geet had so many times in so many FF have been insulted and tortured by Maan in more brutual way but people enjy reading it as Dark love story, here as you only have said only , just the table is turned opposite, everyone is feeling so emotional.

Maan had been punished so many times, here Geet is struggling.. but she is strong girl...

please be with the story dear

Originally posted by: tellyme

Don't worry dear i will give all the deatil..

nahi to i will not get shanti...

may take two update too... but be assure i will not cut short the story... i assure you that much

Originally posted by: ritzy09

No no Anu...you took my comment in the wrong way or maybe i did not express well...i will not stop reading this FF and pls don't change the story...write as u have thought about...

I was very emotional and I get very emotional when I read every chapter...but then that is what you want as a writer na...it is such an emotional journey...and more so because u write it so well...so don't cut out any details please as that will dilute the very essence...

as to my reading it, what I meant was, that i get tempted to do so but it is not fair and I will never stop reading it...never ever. So don't worry...i am not going anywhere...i will read and pour out my heart in my comment...tujhe toh pata hai na...there are some threads where we can say anything we want and this is one of them...so u will always get emotional, teekhe...meethe comments from me...

pls pls don't cut the story short...i will not want it and I will feel very bad. Don't cheat us readers and make me guilty for everyone's loss...

Haha.. i got from your earlier comment only that you are going to saty here...

but to stop thorda thorda temptation of yours i needed to do some emotional blackmailing...

I will not cut short any detail dear but reading "hate Geet, hate Geet" in comment even i get tempted to cut it short, She is our darling na but I won't cut short. But past is almost going to finish now.

Don't worry and pour out your theekha meetha comment dear...

either your update on your FF or your comment on my thread, i love reading anything from you...

so write whatever you want...