MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#2 link THREAD 3 - Page 29

Originally posted by: PariNain

wow so finally he planned to do something
he has to set up a company
very gud
and Geet is feeling something for him
ooye Geet U have a very handsome hubby gal
She is continuously insulting him
I dont knw why cant she think something positive abt him????
Some lines just came in Mind
from Maan to Geet

Ab kis liye rooti ho tum
apnay daman ko askoon se bhagooti ho tum
tum ne he to kaha tha na mujh se aik din
"tumhein yeh ghalt fehmi hy k
tum meri zindagi ka hasil ho
tum meri zindagi mein shamil ho
tumhein ghalt fehmi hy k
mera dil sirf teray liye dhadkta hy
meri ragoon mein laho ban k tu behta hy
yeh tumhari ghalat fehmi hy"
theeik teri har baat theik
par jaana
tum he chahti thi na mein iss dunia ki bheer mein
kaheen kho jaoo
tujh se itna door chala jaoon
teri yaadon mein bhi na aaon
so mein ne tera hukam maan lia
judaai ko apna muqadar jaan lia
par jaana
tum kyun ab meray pichay bhagti hoo
kyun har chahray mein mera aks tlasti ho
tumhari aankon mein
aansoon ka mustaqil daira kyun hy
teray dehaan mein rehta har
har dam mera chehra kyun hy
batao na ab kis liye roti ho tum
tum ne he kaha tha na
k hammary darmayan bas nafrat ka rishta hy
so ab kis mohabbat ka wasta de k maana rahi ho mujhy
baatao na jaana kyun apni oor phir se bula rahi ho mujhy
ab kiss liye dukhi ho tum
ab kis liye roti ho tum

Originally posted by: tellyme

Thanks a ton dear for such an awesome poem.

Your poem touched my heart more than my updates... sacchi

wow the word... they very aptly describe Maan's thought...

Simply awesome

Originally posted by: ritzy09

More of Geet's single minded thought process...all her life shetreated middle class as middle class and failed to realise diamond amongst them...

Initail part was pure attraction on her part for a handsome man who just happened to be her husband. I did not read much emotions there but I wonder if this will have any larger role going ahead

Your precap seems to be about Maan finally making it big or starting in that direction...wonder what will be the last starw when she will move out of his life and will she realsie her love before he will prove his worth or not. You have a big task of balncing those finer emotions and to prove that it is true love on her part now and actualisation of her own thoughts about class etc.

This FF must be so taxing Anu...only u can balance such conflicting emotions and hats off to for that...

Lastly thanks Anu for your best wishes for "Winter Sonata"

You are right.. the Geet's desire was complete physical. Emotion is far away thing. And i will show how the emotion part comes from her side, what leads to it.

That's one thing for readers to watch when will Geet fall in love with Maan.you know what, really this FF is getting more challenging for me than I guessed. So many things to carry on together. Thanks for your confidence in me dear, it means a lot.I just hope to keep upto readers expectaion.

The story is all set in my mind so in anycase I will not change it but readers comment will only help while formating the updates.

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was a fab update!!!

The way you are moving the story is just awesome... U can feel the pain of MSK so clearly... The marriage and his dad made him do things that he doesnt want to do... and it is costing his happiness, thus making him ruthless at present...

Geet is still in her own thoughts and ignoring things... I think she doesnt even consider him as normal employee... her hatred towards the marriage and him has blind her vision of what kind of a person he is...

Lovely update anu... eagerly waiting for the next..

Hi Dear,

Thank you so much for being like a support on all my FFs.

I always love your comments and summarize analysis in few lines.

I really always look fwrd to you comments.
Thank you so much, for all your comments thruout

yes, past has more harsher parts to its story but I will be giving more present from now onwards but past will always be there

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi Dear,

Thank you so much for being like a support on all my FFs.

I always love your comments and summarize analysis in few lines.

I really always look fwrd to you comments.
Thank you so much, for all your comments thruout

yes, past has more harsher parts to its story but I will be giving more present from now onwards but past will always be there