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Posted: 12 years ago

'Khushi...what have you done to me?' - Ahh!! My most fav line ever ... How I love when he realizes & admits that she has driven him crazy! Now he is even ready to vouch for the biggest bullcrap on earth called "love". Doesn't it feel good Naina to create a man & change him for the better? Such a wonderful feeling .. that's what makes writing fictions so special. 😊

Really loved Arnav talking about himself, him changing for her .. beautifully done. One of my most fav sequence of the serial was their telepathic conversation. You know I love conversation! I am just as astounded as Khushi, by his words. A man of few words .. perhaps. But a man capable of magical few words! 😳 And what a match he has found in Khushi .. she complemented his words just perfectly. Her resposne was so sensible, sensitive .. yet to-the-point. You, my girl, is a master of words! 😉
"Neither you or I are alone anymore." - That's the story! His own vouch ..beautiful. He said everything .. the marriage indeed will just be a ritual. He has already promised her himself.. Will Khushi make some promises too?
No more mischief till marriage??? 😆😆 That made me nostalgic! 😛 LOL .. the lion has really found his lioness .. 😆😆
The closing was wonderful .. left me with a really dreamy feeling .. a feeling I felt long ago one Friday morning after a nearly sleepless night. 😊
Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Naina!!!! 🤗

No more 2in1s! Promise! My asli duniya kept me really busy over the last few weeks. 😳

awww hun - I hope all is well? 😊

Khushi really understands Aranv so well. Loved the description of her inner thoughts on the sudden marriage proposal. Also loved the way Arnav understood her & helped her to fight the turmoil.

Conversation! Conversation! This is one thing that can mend anything in relationship. I love you for using this properly in your story. They always talk and come out of everything. absolutely - its a VITAL VITAL component...

I just loved Khushi's reply to Arnav's quip on the letters from the female populace. That was bang on! Nothing to make him jealous but just fit enough to make her point!

I LOVE the little spikes of jealousy that occasionally get to induce 😆

Good to see Devil & Angel back! I told you naa, that the first time that "Khushi-ji" vs "Khushi ki Bacchi" happened in the serial, I thought of you? 😊 And then they showed it! Have they copied this from you and not credite??!! A friend whom I suggested your story just last week also told me that the scene reminded her of Master Class. 😊

love it !! I keep telling the CV's (through this story)... HIRE ME DAMN IT - you will NEVER have a problem with TRPS ever again!!

Ohh! How I love my Neanderthal Man! As always, by the fire, that was a breathtaking description of my man! I could visualize him so well and then I melted!

ooohhh someone feeling a tad possessive about Arnie-kins huh... Khushi has competition I see 😆😆

Waiting for the next update is going to be torturous .. when can I expect chapter 58? Embarrassed I am really eager to see Anjali, Mamiji & Akash's reaction .. then the whole world, including AR! Going by your knack of details, I am happily looking forward to some amazingly picturesque chapters in the queue.

your wish is my command... Chapter 58 is now up😉

PS: Who does not love weddings?

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Posted: 12 years ago
naina...i found this update just before ur pm.thanks to moi stalking abilities😊

this was emotional...this pre wedding talk...


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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait for the wedding...please update soon.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you skip something? Confused huh... Arnav didnt made calls.. For arrangements Aman Raizadas and Guptha.. Waiting fr next update ... Arshis wedding who can sleep peacefully
Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update ...I can't wait for arhi's wedding ...loved every dialogue of arnav...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww this part was sooo cute and frustration lolz 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
They are going to get married...that so cool!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww,they r getting maaried...Soo sweet
Cant wait for next part...
Continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow they are getting married awesome one

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