ARHI FF: MasterClass: Part 59 new thread - Page 50

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

See who res'd first! 😆

Sorry Darling, for not being able to update my last comment.😳 So here goes my 2in1!

thats ok hun - I understand and I'm glad you made the time for the 2-in-1 😃

I just loved the way Arnav reacted to the news (JJ in Lucknow) - it was natural, totally in character, manly. I am rather happy that you did not show him all sensitive, understanding to the news .. Not only Arnav, any man would have reacted this way .. especially when he is planning to propose his woman. As always, brilliant characterization, Naina! 😊 thank you - I guess my approach to this was: just because he's in love doesnt mean that changes his inherrent reactions... likewise with Khushi... she was MAD and not afraid to let him have it!!

And the confrontation ..amazingly written. The way Khushi reacted and the way he understood .. girl, you do know your characters well! Those who are yet to go through these stages in life, should read your story to know what to expect! 😆

"Will you marry me?" - the ultimate four words came out with such spontaneity. I have always felt writing on the ultimate proposal is as hard as to do in real life. And you have really pulled it beautifully dear. Were you nervous about it? 😉 Tellz me, tellz me! Ok... Ok I put my hand on my heart and admit... yes I was nervous because it was critical to get the balance of emotion and characterisation correct, not to mention the added dynamic of the first big first and its associated emotion... phew!! yep, I was BLOODY nervous !!

Khushi's reaction was really good .. I could visualize her with all those expressions and dialogues! But .. but .. the speech from Arnav that followed stole the show ... you totally floored me there! Any girl would be floored by a speech like that .. beautiful! I know.. I'm falling in love with Arnav too... actually I have to tell you this: a reader wrote to me and said that she feels sorry for the current/future man in my life because I clearly have a very very high standard... and she's right!!! I'm thinking I might give him his FF to give him an idea of what goes on in my head 😆😆

Husband .. & Wife ..how more adorable can it get! But the man is already lingerie shopping?? 😆 And you want me to tell you if I want him to stop? Hell No!!! But if Khushi wants him to stop .. what else can I do! *sigh* Why don't you let them celebrate their first official fight followed by a perfect proposal & a perfect response in a befitting manner??😳😳😳 lolll... stay tuned... even I have no clue what the outcome will be... ahhh...to do it or not to do it!!

By the way, darling, this time ..it was a cliffhanger! 🤣 And I don't hate you for that .. 😛 .. take your time to decide whom to stop and what to stop! 😆 you know what... this time it was absolutely intentional, and I dont make any apologies for this 😈 😆 😆

Have a wonderful interview! And may it come positive if it is the best for you. 😊

Thank you very much hun... under 24 hours to go to the interview... I shall keep you posted 😉

PS: The Menu .. you are a foodie, aren't you?? 😃 like you wouldn't believe 😉 😉

Originally posted by: sai_neha

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Hey Nainz,

🤗 for the fantastic update...you left me mesmerized and speechless with this update 😆...I'm still ...I cannot comment any more...I'm too happy to type anything 😃...thanks for the PM.

I dont think I've ever met a speechless you before!! 😆😆 but very glad you liked it.

Cheers,
Sai_Neha

P.S. All the best for your next round of interview 😃

Originally posted by: Rashmi15192

(Thanku thanku
Thanku thanku) x 1000 times
For this quick update..
It was a real surprise dear...
And the Kiss was like Icing on the cake...
Loved it entirely..
The entire update was so so so lovely..
I loved the pic you added in the update...
I wish Arnav carries on with his acts... (wink) LoL...
Thanks for the PM...

Originally posted by: lovelyangel

Of course Arnav will stop and if he doesnot than Khushi(the bharti nari)would make him stop.I don't understand why are the standards so different in india from other countries.

hi hun nothing to do with 'bhatiya nari' standards... Khushi has NEVER said she wont sleep with him because its a religious/cultural requirement from other people. What she has said that for HER, (and I quote:)

I need to go through marriage and its rituals which I hold sacred.' She took another deep breath 'Arnav for me, it's not only about joining of the souls in presence of sacred mantras before union of bodies but it's about exchanging vows of love, duty, respect, fidelity and promising to be each other's companions forever in front of the entire universe and all its energies before... giving myself.

hope that clears the confusion 😃

Anyways,I loved the chapter.It was so subtly romantic and sweet.I love the way Khushi and Arnav(the people of different worlds) interact with each other.So,finally Arnav Singh Raigzada referred himself as husband of Khushi,great progress in the relationship.

love that you love the story... yes, our dear Tiger is ready to be tamed 😉

p.s Love your addiction for writing.

Originally posted by: Nici0306

Love making should not be bound to wedlock.. They love each other and they are committed to each other.. They should make their nights filled with passion heehee..

I get what you mean... and each to their own... our Khushi belongs to a different school of thought 😊

Loved their post proposal time.. You have described khushi's state so well..

Originally posted by: CDlove

is there a possibility you can feel jelouse on a fictional character? because thats excatly how I feel right now... sigh...if this would ever happen to me 😳

lolll !!! I know... I cant count the number of times I have wished he would materialise out of thin air in front of me and say 'take me Naina... I'm all YOURS!! ' 😆😆😆

I think im addicted to this story WAAAY more than the show...please never stop writting this...please!!

I can confirm that presently there is ABSOLUTELY NO DANGER of that happening... I am beyond redemption I tell you... 😳😳