An ArHi Fairy Tale: Completed

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pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Amazing ... Loved it when ll she tell that she is the khushi who he us searching ...

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Wow...This is amazing👏... Now I came to know why did you prefer the first banner I made for you😉... The actual meaning of the Fairy tale is at its peak here...Great...👏

Your vivid imaginations and literary skills make the story a perfect one...😳

"The brown road passing by, the lush green trees accompanying it and the white and blue mountains waiting for it in the distance." A black and white screen feeling... You gave us a complete view of that place only using these piece of sentence...I really admire you...😛

"The red fairy nudged the orange one and both sighed. The yellow one looked on amused while the white one only yawned. The green one spat fire with her eyes while the black one looked at them sorrowfully." A colour game...??? You amazed me once again...I liked it to the core...🤗

" They decided to give them a night of peace. They didn't know what was in store for them in the future. They had no control over it. But they could influence their one night and they would." My eyes caught this...This was such a cute scene...😳

"They silenced all the nightly creatures around the clearing, increased the fragrance of the flowers, moderated the cold of the night, veiled the light of the fire a little and lastly put the two of them to a long, and dreamless sleep." I felt so relaxed at it... I can imagine that peaceful sleep easily...😃

No doubt...I want more and more from you... I really looking forward to it...

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

simply awesome. must say its way better that the actual fairy tales ive read in my childhood!

hope u continue sooon

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Salt and pepper!!,! Awesome...loved how she took care of herself...too good!!!

Fairies were sooo sweet 😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Awesome Saiyu. Wonder what Arnav thought about Khushi's skills. Please elaborate more next time :)

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Awww...loved the fairies convo...😉

Khushi wil be sacrificed for his twin...oh no am getting scared nw...😕

Loved the way hw he was teasing her abt her sleep...lol😆

Thanks for the pm😉

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Simply superb imagination!

Loved the description of the fairies and their deeds the most.

Wah Wah!!

👏

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Beautiful dear... I dont want to come back from there.. Read it 3 times non-stop.

I'm loving their bonding.
And he's in search of HIS KHUSHI!

Omg Goblins, its nice they carried salt with them. Reminds me of 'SPIDERWICK CHRONICLES'

And I loved the convos between the fairies.. Cute Indeed.

And did you 'RASGULLOS' as a place ? Hahaha you are so cute hun! Well I Love Rasgulla ;D

Awe... Arnav was awestruck when he saw her riding the horse, well now she cant pretend and enjoy the horse ride in his arms.
Update soon.

PS : I'm thoroughly enjoying it and I'm a fan now!

Love,
'J'