Since this is my first res here Saiyu baby, I thought I might as well give my comment for the first three chappies here! :)
This is like the perfect Fairytale that I've always believed in and lived in till date! :)
The fact that you've incorporated my very dear ArHi is reason enough to love it more, if I can.
First chapter:
Love how you started it with Once Upon A Time. Makes things so much more interesting. Feels like I've been transported to an era of years begone.
It's the typical step mother wickedness, but well Khushi being a unique as she is, ran away from the house!
Whoops! :D
And on her very first night out, SHE MEETS ARNAV!
This man always keeps my interests up! He is charming and sexy (even if you didn't say that, I assume) with a certain aura of mystery. I love mysterious men! They turn me on 😆
Chap two: Can I first say how extremely cute I found the entire conversation between them? Love how she finds him attractive already. Attraction at first sight 😳
"Khushi gave him her sunniest smile and started eating, absolutely ignorant of the fact that for that one moment his heart stopped beating."
Why are you stopping my heartbeats like this?! :')
Her first day out in the Market was such an eventful affair that ended with Arnav completing his unfinished sentence! Heart skipped another beat! :)
Super cute!
Chap three: Haha! I totally forgot about the fact that in our dear olden days, we only had high ranking people and aristocrats attain education! I for one have a feeling that Arnav knows Khushi's true identity! But here's another mystery left by you. Why has he come from another place looking for Khushi? I wanna knoww!
Arnav is such a sweetheart1 He spent his day's earnings on Khushi! He's already living upto "Your wish is my command" 😳
I want this Man!!!
Awww :') Khushi kissed him and he smiled! Well well well... ☺️
Edited by jessicad - 12 years ago
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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