An ArHi Fairy Tale: Completed

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

awesome updateee...

thnx 4 pm😃

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Awww this was a sweet update. Cant wait for more.

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hina

@mid-night-sun

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

So beautiful dear
An enchanting work
Loved it

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

very cute and innocent!

i like fairy tales... esp the entire description of market places and all things to do with kings and kingdoms :)))

who is arnav? is he a runaway prince too???

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

hi hun

im suppose to be studying but here i am reading this beautiful, wonderful, amazing piece of work...👏😃⭐️

im just so so excited about this story😃😃

i loved reading fairy tales since childhood and now am gonna read 1 on ArHi... i can barely contain my happiness and what makes it even better, ur such an awesome writer👍🏼

i loved loved loved both parts...

i can easily imagine barun and sanaya in every scene

even tho its only 2 parts, i've already fallen in love with and am eagerly waiting for the next part..

i hope in ur fairy tale there are more than just kisses...😳😆😉

plz update soon

take care

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abii95

@abii95

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

im loving this tale of arnav and khushi in a land far far away 😆
you write so well
khushi fits the princess so well, and arnav fits to be 'prince' so well
the devil is shyam right?
its just like the other original fairy tales
cant wait to read more!!!!
please pm me

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Chal tera fairy tale love tere kuch toh kaam aaya. Arnav and Khushi can fit anywhere?

Will she leave her sandal?

Will she be poisoned?

Will he kiss her to life?

Will there be a ball?

Will there be a sword fight?

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

OMG I am first?? Tht to on this update.
grt update as always. Just luved the way both held thr places in the interrogation part in the beginning. So arnav came for khushi? aye hayeee. Aww he brought her the dress.. hayeee. He deserved the kiss khushi gave..
can't wait for the next update.
happy birthday to Bluemystique. U got a grt birthday present must say. And i am extremely sry. U shud have been the first one in this update. really sry dear.😳

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

I am really sorry for the late unres. #KaanPakadKe

I love the story, Saiyu. It's magical and other worldly, which I suppose is the case with fairytales! I love the way you have shaped Arnav, mysterious yet charming. You don't know much about him, yet you feel drawn to him.

And Khushi is learning the ways of life, and I can sense that in the story, great writing. And also the attraction she feels towards Arnav, it kind of reminds me of first crushes and not knowing what it is you are feeling exactly.

And the mystery about Arnav's quest for Khushi, intriguing.

I hope they get their happily ever after :) Move to a blog, so I can be sure of this!

Thanks for the birthday gift, I love it!

Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago