MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA#8 LINK #9 PG 141 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on your new job!!!! I would love the updates whenever it is convenient for you :) thanks for all the updates !

Aisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
very beautiful update Piya
first of all sorry for such late comments...life has just been super busy lately...especially with my health not being good
i loved the fact that Geet opened her heart to him...gussa hi sahi but aadmi rota bhi apno ke aage hi hai...
thier incomplete possessions just tell the same story that they are incomplete without each other...hope they realise it soon.
Very excited to read the precap...to start the story from where it all began...friendship...he can't undo the past but he can make those memories again for her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
congratz for your promotion yaar...regarding the update..i feel u should update as per ur convenience...i'm happy that u will cont. writing in ff..tk u..will be looking forward for ur next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
UFF Finally Sunday is here šŸ˜†

UPDATING 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends here is the next update I hope u like it. As majority of you were okay with Sunday to Sunday updates I have decided to go in for the same option 😳


PART 52

Destiny was playing a strange game. Maaneet were searching for the remaining part of a possession that binded them but they were unaware the INCOMPLETE RING AND THE INCOMPLETE BRACELET WOULD BE COMPLETE ONLY IF THEY MEET'

Sometimes broken possessions can be a perfect start to take 2 souls into a paradise of Love, love and only love'

Sanju went to her room and narrated the whole situation after Maaneet's meeting to Prem via phone

Prem: Congratulations Sanjana part 1 of our plan was a success

Sanju: Prem ye kaisi bachkani baate kar rahe ho? Geet ka yaha roh rohkar bura haal hai aur mujhe pura yakeen hai Maan ki bhi haalat kuch aisi hi hogi. Humara maksad unke takleefo ko dur karna hai usse badana nahi aaj humari jeet nahi balki humari haar hui hai [Prem your statement appears childish to me. Geet is shedding tears and her condition is absolutely pathetic and I am 100% sure Maan's condition is also the same. We wanted to reduce their grief and believe me today we have lost]

Prem: Sanjana aaj Geet ne apne sabse badi sachhayi apne mangalsutra ka saamna kiya iska matlab samajthi ho? [Sanjana today Geet faced her biggest truth; her mangalsutra do u understand the significance of this?]

Sanju: Tum kehna kya chahte ho Prem? [What r u trying to indicate Prem?]

Prem: Sanjana Geet ne apne mangalsutra mein apni saari takleefe sametkar rakhi thi aaj usne apne dard ka saamna kiya aur kayi mahino baad apne mangalsutra ko uski sahi jagah di iska matlab yahi hua ke ab Geet ke dil mein koi bhi dard chupa hua nahi hai jobhi dard jobhi shikayat usse thi usne wo sab kuch aaj apne pyar apne Maan ke hawale kar diya hai ab phir se uska dil ek berang paani ki tarah bun chukka hai jo ke Maan ke pyar ke rang mein dhalne ke liye taiyaar hai [Geet had preserved all her pain in the beads of her mangalsutra but today after a gap of several months she got the strength to face her grief this simply means that now there is not a single element of pain that is hidden inside Geet's heart. She has poured all her pain; hurt and all her insecurities completely on her love Maan. Her heart has once again turned into colorless water which is all ready to get beautified by the colors of Maan's love]

Sanju was listening carefully and was getting convinced by Prem's explanation

Prem: Aaj Maan ko bhi andaaza ho gaya hoga ke usne kis hadh tak apne pyar k neev ko kamzoor kiya hai aur ye sachhayi Maan ke liye janna behet zaruri tha. Maan ab tak sirf Geet ke pyar ko haasil karne ki koshish kar raha tha Sanju mehez maafi maangne se ya mujhe tumse pyar hai kehne se galtiyaan sudhari nahi jaati apne pyar ko jeetne ke liye Maan ko apne hare k bhool ko sudharna padega aur mujhe yakeen hai ab Maan wahi karega [Today Maan must have realized the extent to which he has himself destroyed the essence and foundation of his sacred love and believe me this self-realization was of utmost importance for rekindling their relationship. Till date Maan was trying to regain Geet's love but Sanju just by asking for forgiveness or by uttering those magical words " I LOVE U" is not sufficient for rectifying his mistakes. Maan needs to rectify each and every wrong move of his past to rewrite a new story with Geet to take their love to its perfect destination]

Prem: Humne ek rasta dhikaya tha unhe aur manzil ki shuruwat unhone kar di hai ab hume fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi. Aaj raat jee bhar ke roh lene doh unhe Sanju kal ki subah unke liye muskurahato aur khushiyoon ka sandesa laayegi [ We showed them a way and both of them have started the search of a destination we need not worry now. Let them cry one last time this night as I am sure tomorrow morning will bring a message of happiness and smiles for them.]

Sanju did not give any reply but there was a beautiful smile of admiration and respect for Prem on her face

Prem: Kuch kahogi nahi Sanjana? [Won't u say anything Sanjana?]

Sanju: Tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi hai Prem [I am missing u Prem]

The chords of Prem's heart moved in musical rhythm by hearing this simple line from Sanju

After thinking for sometime he replied

Prem: Ab tumhe mujhe miss karne ki zarurat nahi padegi Sanjana; main kal India aa raha hoon par ye baat sirf tumhare aur mere beecha rahegi [U need not miss me anymore Sanjana I am flying back to India tomorrow but this truth should remain between the two of us]

Sanjana: Maan aur Geet ki tarah mujhe bhi kal subah ka intezaar rahega Prem. Good night [Like Maan and Geet I am also waiting for the next morning to arrive. Good night Prem]

Prem: Good night Sanjana

The call ends.

Meanwhile,

Khurana Mansion

Maan was standing next to his window and was admiring the night sky

He was absolutely clueless and shattered with the turn of events for a brief second he almost felt as if he had lost Geet forever

He continued looking at the night sky the clouds were trying to hide the moon but the moon was trying its level best to declare its supremacy by spreading the folds of its serene light and finally it emerged victorious

The moon was standing in its full glory in front of Maan

A gust of wind blew dramatically forcing some traces of sand to enter Maan's eyes

Maan massaged his eyes slightly to get rid of the irritating sensation and after few seconds when he once again lifted his eyelashes to look into the serene paradise of the moon it seemed he had finally reached the perfect solution for his dilemma

He recollected the special phase of his past life.

Right from the college days he had noticed one addiction in Geet; every night she would manage to steal some private moments away from the gaze of this world to spend with her loyal companion "the moon"

He used to find this habit of hers childish and baseless but tonight after getting drenched in the rain of her wounds and unnarrated pains he knew the reason why she would never miss her date with the moon

The moon was the book wherein she used to write the story of her heart, her pain, her unsaid grief, her aspirations and her innocent dreams

Today the moon was opening every chapter of the book written by Geet in front of his eyes

All of a sudden the good and bad memories of his life started flashing in front of his eyes

He recollected the fact that before developing emotions for one another they were great friends

Their friendship was such that Maan could blindly say anything to Geet; there were situations wherein Maan used to remove all his frustrations, his tiredness by shouting at Geet

Whenever he was happy irrespective of what Geet was feeling he used to make it a point to drag her in his celebrations

He blinked his eyes as the moon showed another aspect of their life to him

Maan had never asked Geet the reason of her happiness infact whenever she wanted to share something with him he would ignore her talks

This was the first mistake he committed

He was never a loyal friend in comparision to Geet

He recollected Geet's words "Tum uss ladki ki talash mein ho jo atteth mein kahi chupi baiti hai kyunki usse aaj ka saamna karne se darr lagta hai...usse haasil karne ke liye tumhe uske dard bhare atteth ko khoobsurat banana padega par afsoos iss janam mein wo mumkin nahi...Aaj ke baad hum dubara kabhi nahi milenge kyunki ab iss dil ko phir se koi kamzor lamha jeene ki taakat nahi hai [U r trying to search a girl who is hidden in the protective shield of the past as she does not have the courage to face the present..U need to beautify her horrifying past in order to claim her back but this is not possible atleast in this life. We will never meet again as my heart does not possess the strength to relive yet another "WEAK MOMENT"]

The sparkling stars twinkled majestically as finally Maan had understood the foundation of his problem

Maan: Tum sahi kehti ho Geet humare rishte ko khoobsurat banane ke liye mujhe humare ateeth ke panno ko sunehra karna padega..main ateeth badal toh nahi sakta Geet par tumhare liye phir se unn lamho ko khoobsurat bana saktha hoon [U r right Geet for making our relationship beautiful I need to rewrite the chapters of our past with a golden ink. I may nit be successful in changing the past Geet but I will recreate new memories for you]

All the hidden aspects of grief were finally out thus opening the doors once again for the entry of a blissful ray of love 'declaring it's time for a new beginning

Maan decides to rewrite their story from where it had started...FRIENDSHIP

Maan kissed his ring and opened one of his old cupboards

He removed one of the albums that contained the snaps of Geet and him from the college days

He inserted his fingers in one of the photos and removed a small paper that was kept beneath it

Geet had a habit of writing songs during their college days

Maan recollected a small chapter of their college days.

FLASHBACK

Maan: Geet ye tu kya kar rahi hai? [Geet what r u trying to do?]

Geet: Maan college mein lyrics writing competition hai main usmein participate karne wali hoon par dekho na main ek jagah aakar atak gayi hoon pls meri madat kar dohna iss song ko complete karne mein [Maan there is a lyric writing competition in college and I am planning to participate in it. But there is a small problem; I can't give the perfect finish to the song pls help me to end this song]

Maan was in no mood to listen to her songs or her lyrics but he didn't want to spoil her mood as he wished to see her accompanying him and cheering for him in a play where he was the lead actor

Hence Maan decided to give a temporary solution to this problem

Maan: Geet mere paas teri tarah shabdo k moti toh hai nahi ke main turant tere problem ko solve kar saku ek kaam kar ye paper tu mujhe de de main raat ko sochkar baaki ke lyrics likhne ki koshish karta hoon [Geet I am not blessed with the pearls of words that u possess hence it would be difficult for me to finf a solution for your problem immediately; I need to think yaar why don't u hand over this paper to me I'll think tonight and will try to pen down the rest of the lyrics]

Geet: Haan ye thik rahega. Ye rakhlo [Yes this will be great; here take it]

Geet hands over the paper to Maan without the slightest of hesitation

Maan kept the paper in his wallet and had ordered Geet to accompany him to theatre where his play was going to be enacted

Maan had kept this paper of Geet in the photo album after reaching his house as he was in no mood to help Geet in any way and he had decided to tell Geet that he had misplaced her lyrics somewhere and now he had absoulutely no clue where it was

Present,

Maan: Ab mujhe tumhari khamoshi samaj aayi Geet; maine jab tumse jhooth kaha tha ke maine tumhara likhe hue gaane ki parchi guma di tumne iska jawab ek chupi se diya tha kyunki tum jaanti thi ke main tumhari koi bhi cheez ya koi bhi kamiyaabi mein shamil nahi hona chahta tha' kitna galat tha main Geet [ Now I understood the language of your famous silence Geet, that day when I lied that I have misplaced the paper wherein u had penned down your lyrics u simply reciprocated with a simple silence as u knew I was never interested in becoming a part of your happiness and your success... I was wrong Geet]

Maan scanned the lyrics that Geet had penned down carefully

Maan: Kaash maine ye labz pehle padh liye hothe toh shayad main tumare dil ki tadap ko parak leta [Had I read these lyrics much before then maybe I would have been successful in understanding the restlessness of your heart]

Maan: Inn adhure labzo ko main phir se tumhare saamne rakhunga Geet par iss baar inn lafzo k adhurepan ko main apne pyar se pura karunga [I will place these incomplete words in front of your once again Geet but this time I will fill this incomplete version with the beauty of our love]

Maan placed a kiss on Geet's photograph and continued

Maan: Kal kayi mahino baad tum apne uss dost ko milogi jiski khwaish tumne humesha apne sapno mein ki hai... Har din har lamha tumhara ye dost tumse ek hi sawal puchega Geet kya tum mujhse dosti karogi? [Tomorrow after several months you would be meeting your friend that resides in your dreams and imaginations. Every day every moment your friend would ask a single question to you "Will you be my friend once again?"]

Maan: Kal ki subah ka intezzar karna Geet kyunki kal humare kahani ki phir se ek nayi shuruwat hogi aur iss baar vaada karta hoon tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka main nahi dunga...mera intezaar karna Geet dua karta hoon ke kal subah ki pehli kiran ke saath humare atteth par se kale badal ki parchayi dur hone ki shuruwat ho jaaye...[Do wait for the coming morning Geet as tomorrow our lives would take a new turn and this time I promise you will never get a chance of getting hurt. I wish with the first ray of the sun the dark cloud of our past slowly starts fading away thus allowing us to rewrite new memories]

Maan went on reading the lyrics that Geet had penned down in an attempt to understand the deepest meaning of each word so that from now onwards every day would be exactly the way that Geet had always wished to see...

PRECAP: Geet couldn't stop herself from picking up the yellow rose as the last words of the incomplete song that Maan was humming had succeeded to make a special place in her heart... Today she knew why she couldn't complete the lyrics in the past the answer was simple it was always meant to be written by Maan...😳


By the way any guesses which is the song whose lyrics I am going to use? šŸ˜‰

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Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
ek clue toh dena yaar????
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Tooo much pain in deir ligfe...
But love will be more ..
Sanju missing prem
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo doosra love story ki bhi shuruat ho gaye...plz sanju aur prem k lovestor bhi dena agar ho sake toh...idhar maan aur geet k zindagi k nayi shuruat honewale hai...ek nayi subha k saath jahan unke zindagi se andhea hath kar suraj k roshni se bhar jayega...dekhte hai yeh nayi subah kya rang late hai unke zindagi mein...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now maan is ready to ractify his all old mistakes...and wanted to start a new friendship with her again
Sorry could not guess the song
Cont soon

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