ArShi FF: Something About You Thread#1 *COMPLETED*

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

WOW!!!!! Just read part 13!!! You are an amazing writer!!! It was awesome!!!! Arshi's dialogues were the best!!! And how Khushi was trying to avoid Arnav was so cute!!! And then Arnav coming over was soo sweet!!!! Loved it!!!! 😊😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

With each part it keep getting better and better!!! PArt 14 was amazing and awesome!!!!! Loved it!!! 😊😊

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

I have been meaning to read this FF for a while & I finally got the time to read. Firstly what caught my eye was the unique concept on which you story is based. I read the excerpt quite months ago but then lost the track of this FF.

I really admire the way you have beautifully expressed each & every nagging emotion felt by the protagonists. I was able to draw out only few similarities with the show which were ASR's attitude & khushi's carefree nature. Rest all was completely different😊

Khushi's serious crush on arnav, that was cute😉 I loved the way you have progressed with the story.

Khushi's anger as when she came to know about the selling of their house was justified, as she had spent most of her life there. I really hated arnav at first talking with khushi so rudely! But then he actuall proved to be the prince charming for her buy saving her from the devil.

He has got quite fast services from people. I loved it that he collected all the facts against karan which solved this issue without pointing a finger on Gupta sisters.

And then the unexpected kiss! I didn't like the fact that khushi avoided him like that but then it was justified on her side as she knew arnav was never interested in a committed relationship & she would never settle for any less.

She tried her best of avoiding arnav but ASR has his own ways of making people talk to them.

Is their something between payal & akash? As Much I remember akash mentioned of liking her or something! And what is about khushi's past? Something disastrous kya?

Read till 14th part & enjoying it already :) Off to read others :D

P.S. It helped me to calm my already fried mind😊

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Ruby Sk

@rubysk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Awesome update... I m reading...

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Just started reading this on a recommendation. Enjoyed it so far. The storyline is well constructed, characters well crafted. The pace of the narration is good and has me eagerly clicking on the link for the next chapter. Fab work. Hope to finish the FF in a couple of days. Will comment more then.

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#936

bravo👏

just finished reading 14 chapters in one go

what a fantastic story⭐️

awesome, awesome and awesome..

thoroughly enjoyed...i really liked it..

And what a brilliantly executed story.

emotion, trust, friendship, romance, everything in this story..

What can I say.. Simply Stupendous !!!

Serene and beautiful!

loved it..looking 4wrd to the next thread..👍🏼

Edited by chandni00 - 12 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

Bookmarking

Finally cmpltd it 😃

Helll freaking awsm😛

Mere some words cnt describe ur whole ff😈

Bt my fav line of dis FF😊

Baby gupta😆

D phn chat were khushi ask arnav wat comes aftr wat the .. Nd arnav say baby gupta isnt baby anymore nd he belive nd in practical demos rather den theory🤣

Dere kisses i m still trying gttng over it

D way u picturised described shown written each nd every emotion was beautifooll

Hayeee d way he calls her red

D way dere relation ship took a chng

His care for her

Her relization abt love for both him nd her

D crucial point were rohan caught dem

Still both thought for each other feeling rather dere own

D way he was sad wen khushi came to knw abt her biological parent nd d past

He helped her to sooth d pain

D teasing .. D fighting
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D tender care love admiring each other

Just beautifull written

Thnkuu for Giving Us SAY

Loved d whole FF ❤️

A request if u plan to write dis Another part Plsss pm me .. 😳 Woulld love to read

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago