KR OS- Penumbra - Page 2

That was so beautiful Tish :')

Very touching n emotional ..!
Thanx 4 d pm ..!

it was a very nice update.. i feel sad for kriya..!!! it was really a touching update...!!!

awesome os...

Omg. . . .
Such an emotional os. . .
M still crying. . . .
Rey died in a plane crash,i realy felt bad 4 our kriya. . .
bt,i must say she indeed is a vry strong gal. . . .
KR have it all,
their understanding. .
Their strong love bond.
Their pure love.
Evrythng. . . .
Its was realy emotional. . . .
Thanks 4 d pm dear. . .
N,pls update ur ff-ST.
And,keep writing such os. . .

Amazing os
hallucination disease-i never knew that something like this ever exist...
Poor kria she tried hard to forgot her past,i felt bad for her but the ending was really awesome
Well looks like living in past n memories is not that bad
ps.try to update ur ff ASAP pls

okay i am still not over kal ka tiff...

lekin the thing is ki what u wrote today i cannot stop myself from commenting...

so in short aap gandi ho...

haan so coming to the OS...

pehle toh thanks for not making the boss a crazy jerk... a relief

will it be ajjeb to say that i really loved it and had a smile plastered on the face...

i know the hallucinations they r the worst thing that can happen to a person coz they leave scars emotionally so deep that they cannot be erased so very easily...
(sorry wasn't able to get a serious monku and i have made this stupid resolute that i will end every line with a monku,... coz u like them )

haan so coming to the update...

i loved how u described it all... the feelings, the emotions, the words u used...

kria was going thru so much... she was able to pull herself just this much that outer world wasn't able to the havoc she was going thru...

rey is a ghost... (a serious thing but the fact is that when i saw this monku i really had to use it)

u know first i thot that it was the same like she wasn't able to move on but the thing was she hasn't moved from her husband's death... life can be so turny twisty nah... if the ones we love go away we r locked in our nutshell clinging to every memory of them unknowingly giving them pains they get seeing us in this state...

thats life isn't it... we know its wrong.. we know we have to move on... we know we have to let go but we are not capable of doing it and looking for incentives to do so... and that we look out in others... that results in hallucinations.. be it a soothing dream or a shocking nightmare...

she imagined rey in every form... she was there soothing her, pulling her leg, driving her off edge, ticking her off, caressing her and then shoving her away... coz this wud have been the real rey if he was alive and something omen had happened...

though kriya tried to run away but also find solace in them only... she knew it was wrong but that was the only thing that kept her moving on... it was like a drug... a very harmful over consuming but a soothing drug...

ur OS gotta be perfect example that moving on is not so easy... u know it is better said than done...

call me crazy... but i loved the OS.. in terms of everything... ur writing style, the feelings u portrayed... the love u described, just everything...

P.S: reminds me of a flick i had watched in the past can't remember the name though...

sorry kuch monkus might not be able to go with the comment... but i tried whatever to maintain the mood... i had this resolute u know to keep...

Wonderful OS.. Keep writing more wonderful stuff..

Thanx 4 the pm..

A totally different concept!
HALLUCINATION 😲
Rey? Dead? 😭
I so hope kria moves on coz
that's what's best for her!!
Wonderful OS!!