SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Interesting story! I love how you've built the element of suspense with Khushi's health and back ground story. But I have to say that Arnav's way of dealing with the situation in the beginning got me mad but I guess he did what he knows how to do best...

Thank you so much for the pm!

I cannot wait to find out what happens next!

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raii

@raii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

liked it...different story...but loved the characterization of arnav!!
do pm me next time when you update!!!

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

This chapter bought a tear to my eyes. Khushi is amazing <3 Beautiful.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

I like ur SS. It has everything;Suspense, love ,desire . Waiting for the next part.

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Claire0206

@Claire0206

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Smita , no words for this SS .

Just read from part 2 - 7 , with a lump in my throat. Just eager to know the truth and Aranv's reaction.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

I keep watching out for updates on this story! Totally HOOKED! ASR is a goner! He is crazy for her, and dont even know what has happened to him!!

The poor Jerk! He is in love!!

Waiting for the next part eagerly and want to know how Sasi and Khushi are related!!

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Abi

@Abi.Na

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

very nice... love this Arnav!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Can't someone knock him on the head and make him realize that this is not how you woo a girl? He is so out of touch with his feelings

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

WOW!Awesome.

I am eager to know more about the past.Looks like Aman wil have another assignment to come.😆

i like this Asr..concernd for her!al the time thinking/worrying abt her!

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Shweta

@Sunset90

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Dear Smita,

What a wonderful update! I love the way the little kid said: " I looove Laddooo". I can see Arnav changing for the better. Khushi strangling Arnav when he spoke ill of Shashi was awesome. I could imagine fury in her eyes. Arnav has fell deep in love with her; He would never want her as a mistress; His concern for her shows that. The way his face blanched when Khushi spoke of an accident that happened years ago, as though it just happened perfectly shows the amount of love he holds. I hope he realizes it before it is too late. Will Khushi open up to him? I'm waiting for the next update so eagerly. Will you be giving daily updates?? I love all the sarees that you have included for her. I love her clothes. Would love to see Sanaya in these attires. Once again thank you for such a beautiful story!!

-Shweta