SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Brilliant update Smita. Waiting to read more.

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sivpriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

luvd it!!!beautiful ss khushi must b an orphan rite??

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Shree Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

loved the ss

typical asr

hurt khushi n then try to undo the hurt

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-daffodils-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

oh...u cried me with ur words...i dont know why ur words have these

much feeling...as always...beautiful update...

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

this story is srriousy great yar wel written:)

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Im feeling bad for Khushi.. Arnav, do something...

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

both parts were heart-rending and very moving... especially loved the dignity with which the kids and khushi behaved in the face of this catastrophe and sense of helplessness... they still believed in devi maiyya and didn't blame anyone nor did khushi accede to arnav's demand which would have solved theirr problems... also liked the fact that the goodness and humanity in arnav seemed to be resurfacing and he felt remorse for the pain he brought to khushi... thank god better sense prevailed and he stopped aman from further ruining her and others' professional lives... and what is good is that he did this before he got to know the truth about khushi's health and the lives dependent on her!

what is his reaction going to be when he learns of her illness? your story is once again holding me in thrall and I can't wait for the update!

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divvk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Amazing update yaar.. why are ur updates short? 😭 give us longer updates na. 😆 do update part 7 today please..

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sargamfriends

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

omg i cant tell u hw much i love this story...in the begining i thought tht as usual he will force her using money and she will have to relent...BUT NO u surprised me...i was so happy whn she dint give in...i was like yeah finally smethng different...lol...hmm is Khushi unwell...oh gosh cant wait for the next part

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sur91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Ok so khushi needs help while climbing down the stairs but she walks fine coz otherwise arnav would have commented upon that so I think she is ill or in some kind of pain. Arnav was almost an obsessive monster for the few parts but now I'm starting to see him in a more humane way.