Taarey+Whole gang SS--Love ki kebab.. finished pg9 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update soon plz :D
and plz update me when you do :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye nehaaa update soon na...dien 4 ur update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg omg omg Neha this was awesome👏...i thoroughly enjoyed this...completely loved it...first of all sharon-rey bonding gosh sharon is a sweetheart and then sharon-taani bonding and taarey so so so romantic and then the gang coming in the same restaurant as theirs gosh i so like want this whole scene in D3 as well...fab Neha please update soon...this was really awesome

plzzz update soon na...dieing to read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi nice plzzz put nxt prt soon plzzz 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this ss has only one part kya?? pls update soon dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neha neha...plz updatw sooonee sooner sooner
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

The next day at college, everyone is sitting in the canteen chilling. The girls and boys are sitting together but are broken into 2 different conversations going on, one between the girls and one between the boys.

GIRLS' CONVERSATION

N: Kal bahot enjoying na?

Sh: Yah, seriously guys last night was amazing! No tension, it was fabulous.

T: Hmmm, kal raat bahot mazaa ayaa.

Taani looks towards Rey, who was sitting diagonally fom Taani, but he is busy in his own conversation with the boys, so he doesn't notice, she goes back to her conversation with the girls.

Sh (whispers to Taani): I know your date got ruined last night, but im sure you will have a proper full date pretty soon, Rey itni jaldi tumhara peecha nahin chore ga.

T (laughs): Nahin Sharon, it's absolutely fine, jitna time humne saath spend kiya mere liye toh wohi bahot hai, unhe mere liye itna socha, I just feel like, I don't know, Ive never felt like this before.

Sh: That's love Taani.

Taani gets shy and says: Lekin Rey hasn't said it yet.

Sh: Tumne kahaa?

Taani shakes her head no.

Sh: Kyun?

T: I want to, but jab bhi main kehne jaati hoon, mujhe sharam aajaati hai. Aur waise bhi, I told him that I liked him first, toh I love you toh unhe pehle bolna chaiye hai.

Sh: Actually you are right, these boys should say it first. Even with swayam and me, tumhare bhai ne hi pehle bola tha (laughs and winks at Taani)


BOYS' CONVERSATION

The boys are laughing at Nilesh's stories about how Vicky acts around Neha.

Nil: And then this guy was running behind neha saying sorry kagu, sorry kagu.

V: Yaar, aisa nahin hain, she becomes a bit sensitive that's all.

Nil: Please, Vicky you are so whipped.

Amar and Bharat make a whipped sound.

V: Please huh guys, im not whipped n all huh, im atleast better than swayam.

Sw: huh, main, isme main kahaan se aagaya.

V: Please we have all seen how you are hanging around Sharon all the time.

Sw: haan toh, boyfriend hoon uska, that doesn't mean im whipped, OK?

Nil: Whatever dude, it's a fact that both of you are whipped.

V: Heyyy Nil, tum log bhi kuch kam nahin ho, jab simmi, rini, yah vishaka ka phone aata hai, you all also get on your best behavior.

Bh: Yeh baat toh hai.

A: Hum sab apni apni ladkiyon ke saamne dheele pal jaate hai

All the boys stare at Rey.

R (surprised): Kya??

V: Tere paas koi ladki nahin hai yaar.

The boys go back to talking amongst themselves, and Rey looks over at taani. He sees her talking to Sharon about something, and he can tell that she is feeling shy about something due to the light red blush creeping up her cheeks.

R (thinking): GOD, she looks beautiful, I need to find a way to spend time with her without these guys.

Swayam nudges rey.

Sw: Kya hua?

R (snaps out of his day dream): Huh, kuch nahin, kya hua?

Sw: Hum tujhe kabse bula rahe hain.

R: Oh sorry, I was just thinking about something. What were you saying.

Bh: Hum keh rahe the ke kal kya dhaasu dinner tha

V: Yah we need to do that more often.

Nil: Thank god plan humne banaye, agar in girls ne banaya hota, toh plan bante bante hi hum buddhe ho jaate.

All the boys laughing.

Sw: (laughing) I know, seriously

Sh: Wait a minute, kya kaha tumne Swayam?

All the boys quiet down as they see all the girls staring at them.

Sw: Woh.. woh Sharon, main toh..

Nil: Come on Sharon, you can't deny that we boys are better at making plans; I mean you girls can never make up your minds.

N: What you saying, babu you also thinking like this?

V: Actually kagu..

Nilesh, amar and bharat make a whipped sound.

V (acting all manly): Haan aur nahi toh kya.

Si: Please guys, we can make much better plans than you guys.

Nil: Come on, don't make us laugh, you girls and making a plan.

Si: Hum jab plan banate hain, toh we make sure we make reservations so we are not wondering around trying to find a restaurant.

A: Tum lalkiyan reselvations toh banaa leti ho, lekin kabhi time pe nahin paunchti ho

Bh: Tayaar hone mein itna time jo lagati hian

Boys: Right!

This breaks into another girls vs boys argument, with everyone talking over each other.

Si: ' Don't even have the decency to..

Nil: .. always changing your mind'

Ri: .. you boys are the same..

A: .. you do the same thing'

Bh: ' GAALI, gaali mat de'

Sh: .. Better than you at least'

Sw: ' Nahin Sharon, galat samajh'

While this is going on, Rey sneaks upto Taani, and hands her a note and walks out of the canteen. Taani opens the note and it says, 'Mujhe abhi wahin par milo' Taani smiles reading the note, looks around to make sure everyone is busy in the fight and then quietly also sneaks out of the canteen. After a while of fighting the girls also walk off leaving the boys.


AFTER THE FIGHT

Basketball court <ViHa>

N: Babu, you also thinking that girls never make up mind of theirs.

V: Nahin kagu, main toh..

N: NAHIN!!!! (Covers her ears- starts to cry) Tum bhi aise hi sochte ho, who bhi apni Kagu ke bare mein, main tumse kabhi baat nahin karoongi.

Neha walks off.

V: (shouting after her) Nahin Kagu, meri baat toh' KAGUUU!!!!! Yaar meri love story mein yeh comma full stop na ban jaaye, ab main Kagu ko kaise mano.

Projection Room <Swaron>

Sh: Girls can't make up their minds huh, well one thing I have made up my mind about, I don't want to talk to you

Sharon walks off

Sw: (calling after her) Sharon, Sharon, im sorry, I didn't mean' God , yeh girls bhi nah, lekin ab main Sharon ko kaise manao.

Fire Exit <Taarey>

T: Rey, aapne mujhe yahaan aane ko kyun kahaa

R: Because I want to spend time with you

T: Par hum toh abhi saath mein hi the.

R (slaps his head): Taani, main tumhare saath, akele time spend karna chahta hoon, you know alone.

T: Oh.. umm alone.. kab?

R: Aaj raat, mere ghar pe

T (swallows hard) Aa..aa..aap ke ghar pe'. Akele'

R (not getting her point): Haan, wahaan pe humein koi disturb nahin karega.

T: Umm, aapke ghar pe raat ko akele..

R: haan toh..

Taani stares at him. Finally Rey understands

R: Ohhh, no nothing like that, I mean it.. aggar tum comfortable nahin ho toh we can do it some other place, like a public place or something.

Taani laughs looking at Rey getting all nervous.

T: Rey, main mazaak kar rahi thi, mujhe aap pe poora bharose hai.

Rey smiles feeling touched.

R: Thanks, for trusting me.

Rey and Taani hug.

The screen splits into 3, Vicky running after Neha, Swayam running after Sharon, and taarey hugging.

Edited by miss_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Loved it.very nice.
Omg rey called taani at his house,realy exited to know what going to happen.
Plz update soon...
Edited by asmamember - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Neha thanks for updating, u did a awesome job. Love it. It's always fun when the boys vs girls fight. Rey wanted to spend time with Taani alone at his house wow can't wait to read what will happen there. Hope the boys dont show up at Rey house for relationship advice lol. Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
omg neha its awesome pls update soon☺️

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