Princess Charming - *ArSha OS* (Completed)

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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
Hey ... hi...
That was such a cute os ... aww thnku!
Loved it ...
Great work ... OMG! thnks!
Cont. soon ... hmm...

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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -shenz-
really good rishu... awwie dii...!!

but baki saare kam padh rahe the jo yeh bhi start kar diyaaa... hehe!

anyways mera aur baaki readers ka bhalaa ho rhaa hai haha!!

u alwayz mak me giggle, njoy ur cmmnts...!!!

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Part 2-

shaktis POV (pink remembr?)
another day!...
uff! mumbai me itni garmi kyu ha? y is it so hot? i know ki ye bada stupid question ha bt still mannn...!!!
anywayz it took me 30 mins to reach my rehearsal place...!
nd finally, finally i ws dere!! i opened d door of rehearsal hall nd OMG!!!!!! amar ws doing push-ups nd...nd he was shirtless!!!!! sweat drops were flowing from his chin down to his chest i hate 2 admit... but 'Yea... he ws luking HAWT!!!!' it took me almost 3-4 mins to com out of dreamland until he finally said
"hey shaks! com in" dreamland ends...!!

a: hey shaks! com in...!
s: ...yes..
her face showed hw embarassed she was to luk at amar lyk dat u know?
a: ill get a shower before rehearsals ok?
s: yeah sure...!

Amars POV (in red)-
oh god, i luved her wild gaze...! she is so damn cute mann..! i feel lyk hugging her right away..! nd ofcourse her little cute embarassed face..! makes me fall for her even more...woah wait...! m nt falling for her ok?

shaktis POV again-
oh god, how cheaply i ws luking at him...!
pta nhi mre bare me kya sochega?
( remembers d push-up moment again )
i feel lyk hugging him tight, i dnt know why bt i just feel so, ok toh vo bahar niklega ill hug him...! ok?

amar coms out of bathrum , shutting d door behind him.. shakti cam to him as if she wanted 2 confess somthing...
s: amar?
a: hmm shakti bolo?
bt shakti hugs him without a word, fr a min amar was damn shocked bt den, he hugged her back!

amars POV-
Am i dreaming?
for d first tym bhagwwn ne meri sun li ha..!
kya sach me...? shes hugging me sachi?
som1 pinch me...!!!!

shaktis POV-
we hugged! awwwie...!
for d first tym i gt 2 feel dat moment wen ur suprised dat how perfectly ur body joints, lyk two puzzle pieces..!
i ws happy ki finally mene apne dil ki suni aur kar dala...!
wow! im finally hugging him...
but mujhe pta ha bahr aane ke bad hes gonna ask me ton of questions! so, shakti be prepared!

both broke out after seconds... shakti was ready 2 answer lot many questions bt amar said just one..
"shakti ye... i mean achanak hug kyu?"

sh: ese hi i felt lyk hugging u so i hugged...!

a: wht?

sh: mri mumy kehtin hain ki jo dil me aye kar lena chaiye, vrna keval pachtate reh jaoge...!

a: true...!

dey practiced until dey wer covered wid sweat..! shakti found a picture of amar wid some frnd...!?

s: ye kon ha amar?

a: shes my best frnd Charlie...!

s: amar...

a:oh i know, i know ab tum puchogi ki kya ye tumhari gf ha?

s: ( laughs )

a: hans kyu rhi ho?

s: sorry... ( laughs )

a: arery btao toh..

s: teri koi gf hogi... ( cont laughing )

a: dekho bahut grls meri deewani hain vo toh mri sharaft ha jo me unhe kuch reply nhi karta...

s: laughs harder... shakl dekhi ha? bandar dikhte ho pure..!

a: accha me bandar huh?

nd he chases her... finally catched n tickles her vrry vrry hard..!
shakti laughs nd laughs...

s: amr stop!

a :nhi me toh bandar dikhta huh na?

s: nhi baba tum bahut handsom ho ab stop!

a: aagyi shakti pahad ke neeche?

s: han aagyi bas..?

amar leaves...!
shakti continues laughing..

a: shakti itna mt hanso pet dukhega...!
nd luks at her smiling...
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leave ur lovly cmmnts, ill read dem all...!
bye, abi tution ke liye lat huh...!!!!!
luv u!!!!
did u lyk it?
aur cont karun ki nahi plyzz btana...!!
next update aftr 20..!!

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@NishKP

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

amazing update

loved it so much

plz update next part soon

Edited by kriyaansh4ever1 - 12 years ago

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

res

unres

eepss...now i knw ppl r generally supposed to leav long comments after res but teri galti hain...omg arsha so adorable...me blush kar karke read karin d entire part..i loved it so much...n d hug...d part wer u described it wid d puzzle was so true 😳

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesome...

arsha r so cute...

thnx for pm...

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awsome update...
Sweet one
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome update

shakti was right jo dil kahe wo karna chahiye

i loved their cute fight

thanks for pm

update soon

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Nice one..!!
Shakti droolin ova Amar.. 😛

He is actually hawt.. Nah.. Very Hawt.. Me too mad fr him 😳
Hun.. Lets not go to it.. 😆

Ooops.. Shaks ua cought..
Thr Amar is too thinkin abt her..
N thn d huggieee... Shaks hugged Amar as her heart askd her to do so... Awww
Lovd it!