Hieee all...
just thaught to write dis...
hope ki aap sabko pakaon na...
plyz read once...
nd haan... all kinds of criticism accepted!!
dis OS will end in 3-4 parts (i hope...)
i dnt think dat i need any CS kyu ki ham sab jante hain amar aur shakti kon hain firbhi...
amar- hotty crush of every girl..
shakti- sweet bubly cute girl... evry guy cnt help admiring her...
jus hope ki sabko accha lage... .plyz batna ok?
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Part 1
i stood dere, i wnted 2 go in bt i ws nervous, pta nhi partner kesa hoga? pta nhi log kese honge? adjust karenge ki nhi...? hop ki sabkuch accha jaye! he bhagwan thodi mddad krna... as i walked in , i wnted to see everything.. bt vo mota aagya...
"miss shakti?" yes shes our diva SHAKTI...
"yes.." i said, nd felt lyk a queen!
"this way.." he said...
he took me to a room a room wid mirors all around... "here..."he left saying i opened d door nd went in... dere... i saw a guy! i didnt see his face bt i saw him from backside " wish ki akdu na ho!!" i ws continously wishing
"hello?" i finally said
"hey hi, u must be shakti?" he said bt i did not had any idea who he was...!!
"yes, n u must be..."
"amar" he said
Amar (isnt he cute?)-
Amars POV (in red)
she entered nd wow! wht a cutie she is... looks cute yrr... hope natur b accha ho?! bt vo itni seedhi aur bholi si ha pakka acchi hogi... shes d 1st girl jo mujhe 1 bar ke liye princess charming jese lagi ab dekhtein hain...
shakti (super cute hena?) -
sh: so amar, tum kya karte ho?
am: sabse pehle toh dance kyunki aur koi kam toh ha nhi mere pas, aur bich me mai teacher bhi tha... tum batao...
sh: mujhe sona pasnd ha, aur me dance bahut zyada karti huh...
shaktis cell rang...she xcused herself...
am: boyfriend tha?
sha: wht?
am: mene kaha boyfriend tha kya?
sh: nhi.. frnd tha...
am: oh srry!
sh: aur tumhari?
am: mri gf nhi ha...
sh: nhi ha...!!??
am: han kyu koi bina gf ke nhi reh skta?
sh: i mean teri gf kyu nhi ha?
am: kyuki me PRINCESS CHARMING me vishvas rkhta huh...
sh: PRINCESS CHARMING???
am: arrey jese tum girlz ka so called Prince Charming vese hi princess charming! basically me 1 princess jaisy ladki ka wait kr rha huh...
sh: aur kesi hogi ye so called princess charming?
am: bholi si, cute si, thodi pagal, jab me complimnt dun toh blush kare,apna lip bite kare, sweet ho, simple ho, sabse alag hogi meri princess charming!! ab practice karen maharani ji?
sh: jo hukum maharaj...
dey practiced fr som tym...
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hey guyz!
pta ha mujhe sab bahut jute marne vale hoge?
ki 2 FFs to update kr nhi rhi aur OS chalu krdi mahaan...
so plyz mujhe btana ki aap sabko kesa laga!
agr accha ha toh wooo!!!
nhi accha lga tab bhi ok ha jii...
vese ye bhi btana ki continue karun ki nhi ok?
now me bhaging yahn se...
nd dnt frget to hit d tab...!!!!!!
for pms buddy me!!
INDEX-
part 1- scroll uppart 2- pg 8part 3- pg 16part 4- pg 26
Part 5 (last part)- pg 29
Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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