Just came across this story yesterday n been reading it continuously with hardly any sleep🥱 But i couldn't leave d story halfway coz its so entertaining n gripping.Each n every character in this story is etched out so perfectly dat i can imagine them rightly n although they r inspired from d show but after a while they take a whole new dimension n after a while i even forgot dat they r d Arnav n d Khushi...which is a huge complement to u as a writer coz its very difficult to give a life of their own to these iconic characters...but u do it effortlessly 👍🏼 👏
Also ur sense of humour is outstanding...there's hardly any chapter where u've not left ur distinctive humourous mark.So many scenes,so many lines where i went 🤣😆 (bcoz of this my husband kicked me out of d bedroom last night as i was laughing so much while reading d story while he ws trying to sleep😳 but like a shameless addict i kept on reading in d other room😉 ) Also there r stories where sometimes u tend to skim lines if d narrative is long or u r short on time but in ur updates its impossible to do so bcoz each n every line is there for a purpose...so its my loss if i any of d lines r left unread.U r an absolute marvellous n gifted writer. 👏 Hope u keep on writing like this forever.👍🏼
Now i regret joining d forum so late 😔 .But better late then never...otherwise i would've been unaware of the huge talentpool of writers like u.N b assured i'll be coming back to this story again n again(although i hardly repeat stories) just bcoz of d amazing one liners n d amazing characterization of all d characters...loved cement pile,lattu,fire extinguisher,book worm,nihal n anjali 🤗
Now i m off to read ur other work -Arnav Khushi meet Sanaya Barun😊
Also m sending u a buddy request if u can plz accept it n plz pm me when u update any of ur work.
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