Ariya SS: Tujhko Jo Paaya.. (10A & B) 08/01

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

omg!!!!!!!!! gr8 update:)👏

u r just incredible:)...the way u wrote riya's emotions...while holding arjun.😳😉..hatt's off to u dear:)👏😊👍🏼

loooved it to core:)😉😊

thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Avantika agar aap ne itne interesting ss likhna band nahi kiye toh mein fail ho gavon gi.reham karo
wow wat a story
continue soon

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Chap:1

Arjun, You're such an idiot!!

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Chap:2

Oh kill'em Arjun!!

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Chap:3

Awesome! The way you have described their emotions! Ending bit was too adorable! Poor Shree :P :P Oh! I loved Chotu and rathore too :D :D

The precap sounds tooo interesting!! Riya, from a depressed lover to a vulnerable victim to wild cat!! ahaha!! Would love to read that :D

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Rong_ria

@Rong_ria

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

'Main kuch na karoon, toh problem; kuch karoon toh bhi problem! Aakhir aapko mujhse aur kitni problems hain?' like the precap...
And last scene of part 3...Shree was so cute...

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

sorry 4 being late but bit busy

awesome one again dear

loved it

thanx 4 the PM

update sonn

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sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

amazing yaar...u r one hell of a good writer...

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Sabina_Ansari

@Sabina_Ansari

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Loved the part, riya trusts arjun evn in unconsiusness, tht shows wat importance she has of him in her life..
Precap is vry good..
Enjoy ur trip, wud b waiting for updates...

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elle..

@elle..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Picture banaega.. meri riya ki!!!!
Hayye kya dialogue thha...muuuaaahhh arjun
Riya even in subconcious state waited for arjun to rescue...hyye meri jaan...yehi to h saccha pyar
Nnd shree. Pllz tke care of urslf :p
Aesum part
Update soon

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

awesome update again 😊
loved riya's trust on arjun and arjun ka love and care for her 😊
shree to gya chotu ne toh apni choti khol di 😛
waiting for precap..thanks for pm 😊
jiju k lie bura lag rha hai..dishes dhone padh gae 😛