Ariya SS: Tujhko Jo Paaya.. (10A & B) 08/01 - Page 41

Shree glanced at Chottu, "Nahi nahi.. Dard kyun hoga.. Bass sar par danda hi toh pada tha na.. Aur uske baad Arjun Sir ke angry young man wale gusse se bhare stares, Rathore Sir se suspension ki dhamki aur raatbhar Chottu ki daant.. Bass itna hi toh saha hai maine.."

Good, serves him right for being "happy-to-help" on the wrong things😆!. But I didn't get one thing –

Chottu gritted his teeth,

"Mujhe kya hua? Aai shappath, kal raat agar tum dono behosh nahi hote na, toh Arjun Sir ke haathon Mahashivratri ka prashad zaroor khaate.."

Ab iska kya matlab tha 😕? anyway, choddo usse ..it's always refreshing to get these BFF moments in midst of so much romance and emotions😳. The scene in the temple was really sweet ..about chottu, well, woh toh hai hi bhukkad, kabhi nahi sudhar sakta😆!!.*shakes head* but arjun's sudden presence in the temple goes on to show how much riya's beliefs and faith had started impacting him, so much so that he decided to end his animosity with the Almighty finally..and I'm pretty much sure that one day he would happily accept the prasad too😳, without any persuasion from anyone. I was all smiles when arjun was stammering on the phone while asking her out on the date .. I mean, WOW, ACP Akdu ko stammer karna bhi aata hai😲😉 !!!

About the date, I'm already falling short of words of what to write and how to praise you enough for penning down such a fantastic confession scene👏.. it's enough to sweep anyone off his/her feet, the heart-to-heart convo between Ariya was awesome. Of course, the ambience created for the date added to its beauty, specially the lights used to brighten up the place, for me, it's symbolizes the brightness that riya had brought into arjun's life with her presence😳. But the best gesture of all was arjun's putting the locket in riya's neck ..the same locket that was once roshni's prized possession, uske aage toh saari confessions bhi feeka hai. Starting from the last night upto this date, arjun had confessed his love to riya several times by now, both directly and indirectly, and each confession seemed to be more pure, intense and magical than the previous one😊. And even in the midst of all the "ahem ahem" scenes later on, I'm just floored by the way arjun was giving her ample chances to back out in case she felt uncomfortable at any point. But inspite of your warning regarding the update, I must say that it's nothing compared to what you did in ASD😉.

All in all, it was a wonderful story ..waiting to read more of your work, update Lady in Red asap!😊