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sareen.chandani

@sareen.chandani

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

im a new member and have just started posting on people's posts. and ur's is one of them. loved it. so much that im left craving for more😊

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

One of the best Arhi stories I have ever read...

Loveddd it..

Very emotional. ?

Especially chap 15 n 16 were dammnnn..

Outclass..

Loved it farah..

Os was awesome too

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

I just cannot believe this !!!! The fact that I ADORE your ' something about u' to madness u cannot comprehend :) and missed reading this one TiLL NOW!!!! I have that one almost memorized with all her clothes etc etched in my head .. Now this SS is the newest favorite for me . I absolutely loved it ..

One more thing -- I have never liked the character of Anjali - in the series , in many ffs etc .. She's ways been manipulative . Sweet only for her brother . And I loved how khushi finally stopped being self sacrificing..gave me a closure

Edited by Serene77 - 11 years ago

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

wow... amazing OS... loved it 😉

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Such a cute OS... Trust Mr. Raizada to b caught in action like this nd escape so smoothly... Upar se kissing his wife nonchalantly before his sisters & the children... This is just one of those hundreds more reason I love this man this much... Loved the OS... Its superb...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

I am back here agzin, Farah.

Its tough to let go of your stories.

Read the story again.

This was the time when you'd update everyday.

And then you'd update SAY every other day.

And now there's nothing.

I wish you'd write something for us again.

How I miss reading your stories!

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Awesome OS and fantastic story of Arnav becoming a father. The plot was excellent and the way you build the story was outstanding. You are a brilliant writer and it was absolutely wonderful reading the story. Your command on language, situations, characters and emotions is truly fabulous and that is what made this story of Arnav khushi such a wonderful read. Loved th characters of Arnav and khushi, how Arnav finally understands that his need to make khushi happy surpasses everything else in his life and he cannot make his di happy by making his khushi miserable. Lovely storyline and couldn't get enough of your writing. 🤗 I really hope you write more arshi stories. You ar such an amazing arshi "treat" !!nn 😳

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Farah,

This is one beautiful OS and a fitting epilogue to Becoming Father. I think you are one of the few who justify both Arnav & Khushi's characters equally.. I especially loved how you did not make Arnav go after Khushi to her Buaji's after their fight over Dadi (and for me Khushi was totally wrong and Arnav's behavior towards his Dadi totally commendable).. Their coming together was so natural with that Haldi mess and Khushi's hormonal behavior/apology for making their life a mess 😆

Ohh I was dreading Anjali & Dadi combo here and couldn't understand Anjali's argument for taking over the baby just because Arnav yells😡🤢 Hats off to you for putting them in place by making Khushi stronger and a little selfish (to want her baby for herself) and Arnav being there for Khushi emotionally as well..

I wish you come back to IF and write more stories!! We need more authors like you that make an impact with their stories!!

Also thank you for not removing your stories and giving a chance to cherish them.!

Love & hugs

Kavi