OS: Caught In Action - Page 7

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Also, you shld link this to your main BAF index. Thanks for the PM Fari 😊


This is what i like about fan fiction. It gives me every thing for Arnav and Khushi that the show never did.

You gave me NK cutely getting engaged.

The continued camaraderie between Khushi and him

Anjali away from the creep and happy with her husband and daughter.

PayAsh have a baby girl too. How lovely!

And not only the above couple, but also Arnav and Khushi, everyone has daughters with an A name. Cool, I like it 😊

Love and passion tends to take a back seat when life takes over. But it it always present in case of them.

It takes a brief retreat somewhere or a few brief kisses behind a pillar 😳

Btw Anjali still knows how to ruin a rabba ve, right? 😆

Thanks for writing this Fari 😊

hehe my half comment is on the main ss link..

I hope Khushi agrees to the plan 😉

fari di i had to borrow my friends lappy for dis...so dis is just for u...



chap 1

i was just giving a wistful sigh while reading the chappy...how i wish i saw dis domesticity in the show...how i wish i saw dem being used to each oder in a manner dat life was nt at ll possible without each oder...the waking up in each oders arms...the soft kisses...the pouts...the care...the concern...the innocence...khushi's governer giri on arnavji...nd arnav's obliging to it...here goes another wist ful sigh...i just cant stop thinking abt wat ifs

chap 2

here i read the starting note of the story where u say going by the realationship anjali arnav share...dis is bound to happen in the show...
even i believed dis to happen someday...but sigh...(dis pm is gonna hav lots of sighs...sorry 4 dat)

ev wen khushi nd arnav were not in love wd each oder...dey understood each oder with just a single stare...we see how he knows dere
some problem wd her...arnav was supposed to hav a non caring attitute...he never cared abt his family's presence while he
pampered khushi...i remember during shagun..how he comes holds her hands nd takes her to the room...all the oders just gaping..
least bothered abt wat oders thot...we see dat arnav here...nd i love dat arnav
i love the part where u spoke abt hw he keeps track of all the vehicles coming nd keeps shouting at her while she has head poking
out of the window...so very arnav khushi...
uhh again how much i wished al dis happened...khushi...comes to his office nd he abandons all the meeting to just be wd her..
godd i want all ur scenes in my show...i mean i wanted... :(
arnav wants to have children just becoz khushi wants...dat shows hw is life is just abt her

chap 3

haha arnav's reaction was funny...but the way he gave bak to khushi was funnier...khushi is so adorable wen she is teased...nd love
how evytime arnav pacifies her...
i loved the flashbak...both versions...but one thing dat bothered me abt both the characters is..how come arnav was so calm abt
being kissed ...i mean the way arnav was shown in the show...after being in love wd khushi...he wont let such instances go d way he did
in the chappy...khushi i hav always seen to be vocal ...but i guess wen it comes to insecurities she is not...may be we might see it happen
in the future updates m yet to read...loved how khushi wanted him to herself wen she saw him in a lip lock wd becca...
well thanx to becca now she is preggy...
waise i think u can write good intimate scenes...u should really try dat...i can judge by the way u write deir romance...deir love..
u cn absolutely write a brilliant love making scene as well...u should try doing dat

chap4

well wen ur man is happy just becoz u are happy...can u pray for something better...dere has been a lot of fictions on dis forum where writers do mention dis line dat arnav does not deserve khushi...whether the fictions had d same storyline from the show or sumthng else...arnav alsways realised dis in the stories...nd dere dis part in me dat says no arnav deserves khushi nd khushi deserves arnav...i dnt thnk either way it could have been possible...like the way no one could handle arnav's anger nd dominance...similarly no one could have handled khushi craziness...nd stupidity...game even...

ok coming to the story...so arnav is smiling coz khushi is smiling...nd wat was dat khushi being the filmy she is ...planned hw things would be broken infront of the family...nd wow everythng spoiled...courtsey :arnav...

nd seriously did payal answer arnav first...

i ve always loved one thing abt the show...the family bonds...shared by the raizadas...nd deres dis one thing just one thing i would like to thank the makers for...dey dnt spoil it till the very end...like oder shows suffer...especially nani's char...yes after arnav...it was nani in the raizada house who actully loved her the most...the scene in the mandap where she just goes to console khushi...dat yes ur arnav will come...broke me into tears...she was the only one who thot abt khushi in the raizada family...

manorma mami as usual was fun...

di ...uhh wat do i say abt dis char...i was fond of her in the beginning...nd den i hated her...
the moment u say the first instinct is always right u are on wd the concept...

so here begins the story of a strong khushi...


P.S i love all those small moments betwen arshi from nok jhoks...to lovey dovey looks...i wanted all this to happen in the show...so very much...


uhhh i miss my sanka devi nd laad governer...i miss my show so much

chap 5

hmm well having the entire raizada clad having dinner together wow...again u mentioned here dat arnav was happy dat khushi is happy ...nd the fact dat he has contributed to dis happiness adds to his smile...y does dis man feels he has nt done contributed to her happiness...i dnt llike it wen he feels dat ...he has done evything beyond his capability to make her happy...wat he is doing right now wd the child on the way is another xample for the same...

uhh well he can just let go wants khushi to let go a kiss he shared becca ..in the name of ex-GF...while he does nt even let NK to hug his lady as a devar...hypocrisy much????

ok it was sweet dat he took her in his arms to her bedroom ...set the alarm time..so dat she can wake up at the right ...nd dats y i say he does evythng for her...

the note was naughty...

love ur dresses...

khushi ...well dis is the khushi i wanted to see in the show...where she thinks she has the right to take her husband's money nd also to support her parents...independently...i so wanted her in the show...


u are writing evythng i wanted in the show...

chap 6
i dnt like dadi here...forget here i dont like dadi anywhere..
khushi nd payals's convo was cute...reminded me of the late night chats dey used to have...specially the line where khushi says arnav is already irritated wd the names she uses for him...may i know dose names...if dey are something new dat we dont know ;)

anjali has taken arnav for granted...yes dats wat i call her...she very sweetly made him do evythng wat she wanted...as he gives her evythng she needs compromising his wishes...she thinks asking for his baby will not be a big deal at all...nobody thinx abt my poor khushi...she is so excited abt her baby

chap 7

ok dis is one of the most important chap...marks the beginning...gives us a depth of wat both arnav nd khushi think abt becoming a parent...i m being honest here wen i say i dnt like the frst part.u know the reason absolutely..m happy u kept it short...i do hav dis feeling dat dadi might have planted dis into anjali's head... i dnt know...

arnav just yes ...nd just like dat???

well initially i reacted in this manner...but den i realise dis is the char dat actully relate to one we saw in the show...no ..m nt taking in a sense dat he was ready to do nethng for his di...hampering khushi's happiness...no not at all...i realised in the show itself dat he wont let go khushi or hurt her to make anjali happy...wat i mean here is dat he was not ready to become a father...the way his char was written...it should have taken him a lot of time to accept fatherhood...to feel happy abt it...becoz he did nt actully know wat nd how fathers are...infact he shared a feeling of hatred wd his father...how could he feel secured nd happy abt being a father ...wen he just did nt share nething wd his father...he did nt understand wat it was to be a good father...so wen dey were trying to show dat in the show dat arnav was anxious to become a father...the time wen barun was leaving...i could nt relate to arnav as a char...fatherhood should be the most difficult feeling for arnav...even more difficult dan love...

neways i loved khushi...but i did nt like wat she said...how can arnav not want her...but den ne mother would react in this manner...i know the khushi in the show would hav readily accepted...though...

chap 8

till watever i have read in this story dis has to be my fav chap...not just in story,,,,,but dis has become one of my fav confrontations...how beautifully written...giving us the real arshi...

i dnt know wat do i write abt dis...speechless...i am after reading dis...
to tell u the truth i hate wen arnav hurts khushi...but i m hurt wen arnav is hurt himself by his words...i know he is a char full of flaws...he is rude...mean...ruthless...nd still i cant see him hurt...so wen khushi was hurt by his tight hold on his wrist i did nt feel dat bad...but den the moment she said those lines...nd he was numb...i was crying...i know dats so unfair of me towards khushi..bt wat do i do m biased towards arnav...

khushi is crying...nd her husband cant just let her do dat right... i loved his monologue...y did nt we have such monologues in the show...i loved how he just snuggled beside her nd pulled her to him...nd my heart brroke wen khushi broke down in the arms of the man she love...nd the moment he says nobody will take ur baby away form u...i realise two things

1)he can do nethng nd evythng for khushi...nobody else comes into picture at all

2)he has no strings attatched to the baby...or to be more precise he does nt really realise the importance of the baby ...the love he has for it as its father...

nd yeah he said it all he did dat becoz he thinks dat just like he wants nothing more wen he has khushi wd him...khushi shares the same feeling...he got more dan wat he felt he will get in life...he desires nothing more...he does nt realise dat its the symbol of deir love for each oder...nd khushi has to make him realise just dat...yeah he has to learn to become a father...nd for dat he needs to know wat a father is...

chap 9


i have always wanted to see a morning after in IPKNND( i m sorry if m irritateing u wd my "i have always wanted"s) nd here i have one of the best...khushi waking u nd the first thing she sees her handsome husband staring at her...wow how does she resists him early morning...forget early morning...how does she resists him at all??

loved wen arnav was all naughty ns th moment he sees her bruises nd regrets his actions...his eyes are the most expressive eyes ever...speaks from heart...he kissed her bruises tenderly nd his wife understands wat has led to a sudden change in behaviour...wat has led to a regretful arnav from a flirtatious arnav...nd den i smile wd eat she comes up to cheer him up...uh dey are meant for each oder,...dey fight passionately...nd d way dey make up is even more better...

so khushi keeps tabs abt his wrk thru aman...wow...nd add dis to the list of my "what i wanted to happen in the show"

m xtremely happy dat arnav just said it once nd all to anjali how he cannot give d baby...nd how he cannot just hurt khushi nemore...not giving her ne chance to comebak wd another reply...nd m glad atleast dis time she accepted peacefully...

arnav ...well can ne1 just care enough for his wife ...the frst thnghe asks his wife after waking up is abt her health nd nausea...he se reserved till khushi nd Dr are having a chat...but the moment he realised dat something is being done wd his wife he started wd his rapidfire round...nt even giving the doctors a chance to answer his "very important" questions...he is just too cute...d questions were funny...nd funnier was khushi's response...did she just threatened him to deprive him from deir daily activities...how could see wen ur husband is so caring nd loving...nd most importantly incredulously irresistible...????

chap 11

khushi is a minx...she tried to play him so dat he doesnt get angry on her...nd again i m repeating dis...i hav read it at so many places nd i wanted dis scene in the show where arnav gets mad over evy1...shouting at dem fussing over khushi...if she missed his call...sorry i started again...coming to the update...wen u mentioned the blouse being different from the saree...i was like might be related to some paast of deirs where dey must hav shared a passionate love making thingy when khushi wore dat blouse...even after seeing the picture of d saree i did nt for once think u are referring to hut suhagraat...hell u took me bak to those moments where d looks in his eyes were enough to bring the goosebums...both on khushi's spine nd my arms... :D...i wish we did nt hav body double shots...the presence of Bds spoiled it for me :(...ok so arnav told her wat h wanted to do wd her den...nd now dat he has finally chased her...he will do wat he wanted to so den...

ok so khushi now knows dat how arnav has to realise the feeling of being a father...mamaji into consideration...yes he surely was a father fig to arnav...

yeah khushi however how sexy u look ...however how much u groom urself...dis man takes the lime light... ;)


chap 12

one thing dat i have loved abt is how dey talk through deir eyes...dey can make love through dere eyes...wat attracted me to this show was just dis talking through the eyes...nd we have d same thng
going on in the car and the moment wen he takes her out of the car,...had manmi nt been in the car dey might nt hav been able to keep deir hands nd mouth to each oder...nd dey forgot mami inside while havind
deir famous eye tak...LOL...

so khushi wants aman to call her bhabhi ...nd arnav wants a strict mam,,,,...i pity the guy...
khushi is trying to search arnav...nd arnav has his eyes all set on khushi...the moment he sees her fidgeting he knows food is the only option... :D

i love how mamaji teases mami abt the shortage of food in the kitchen...huh. iloved the mama-mami moments in d show...

nd deir go wd deir eye-taks again...nd dis time he calls her to him...nd she goes...i absolutely love d way dey make demsleves comfortable in each oders arms...nt caring abt the world...

hmmm however serious aur funny the matter be arnav does nt like to be wronged...ofcourse the ASR attitude...nd khushi being khushi continues irrespective of his annoyance...
i absolutely loved their conversation...how he shared thngs abt college wd her...we also got a char analysation of mamaji sumthng the show lacked.. a father wen knows dat sumthng is harmful
for his child...hel immediatedly distance himself nd the child from that thng...it feels gud wen i see arnav talking wd khushi... a man who is known for keeping thngs to himself wen actully shares
abt his life...sweet nothings...dat simply means dat the oder person is realy special...though i dint understand y he changed the topic wen she asked abt "THE TALK"..

"I will make the kid respect you too, Khushi. No one is getting away without giving you the respect you deserve"

nd dis line simply states the repect he has for khushi...wen a man makes sure dat his child respects his mother...dat is becoz he himself holds a lot of respect for her...

nd again dis man prooves y he is the best husband...for a man who didnt know the ABCDs...of customs nd rituals...for some who didnt even belive dat marriage is bond
required for two peple to be one...is nt only carrying all the responsibilities nd fulfilling all the "vachans",...but also remeber dat dere's dis ritual of providing the to-be mother wd
a shagun...nd just becoz he thot his family forgot...he arranges for the same...u got me into tears,...no one could have love khushi more...no1...nnd contrary to wat evy1 says...
HE DESERVES HER!!!


chap 13

nd did dis man say dat he is nt feel much abt the child...if dis is wat he does wen hes nt much into dis
child ..searching stuffs nd all to know abt pregnant ladies...wat will he actully do wen he actully starts loving it whole heartedly...

poor khushi she's so cute wen she says m nt up...

nd he is already calling d child a kiddo...khushi madam is stunned...uhh dey missed the diabetes part...
khushi is panicking nd dats quite natural for a mother..i love how he tries to calm her down...how he says he will make things better...
khushi slept in the comfort of his arms nd due to fatigue bt the man was restless...u are already a father...a loving nd a responsible father Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada

nt just the best husband bt he is the best father as well did he just call Dr.Jain at 6 in the morning..
poor lady nd khushi is worried if she would see her...arnav made sure he knows abt things as early as possible..

nd den he asks abt her health as sson as he sees her up...nd again i would say he is the most caring hubby...
nd finally he sleeps...a calm father...i loved the part where he asks khushi nt to move so dat he could sleep peacefully...

nd den he sends nani nd payal wd her breakfast caring nt to disturb her sleep...could he get more adorable...i guess yeah..he outgrows his own records..

so nani got a shagun for khushi...uh i know nani is really adorable..she has always loved khushi...

nd trust me di i dnt want to speak abt dadi nd di...dey are here to destroy...i know the next chap is full of dem...

Lovely OS.

loved it so much 😳 super os 😳