New SS: Unfaithful (chapter4 updated) P28 - Page 3

OMG !!!!

liked the concept...pls continue soon

LOL why all are shouting??

Here I m dancing! Arnav with another woman LALALALLALLA!!!

OMG!!! LOL hahahahahhaha I want this Arnav also!! LOL I know everyone will slap me😆

But I love this Arnie also😳

Claps!!!👏 👏 No mushy mushy Arnie Peleeejjj😆

LOL Ok, I want blog updates fr this SS😳😉 *Runs Away*

very very interesting please continue soon

like the concept ...update soon

Originally posted by: the-crazy-girl

Adorable hi my darling,
I have a proposal for you : why you didn't come and write with me this SS? 😉
Really, I think you should write your own FF or SS and put the ideas you want and create the end that you decide...it will be great and I will be glad to read it 😃
with love
the crazy girl

Are you really asking me or is this the way to tell me that keep my thoughts to myself, and you care damn about my suggestion?

Firstly, I do not have that creative mind. I wish I had so I could write something but sadly I am not creative person...Whenever I comment or say something about some story, I put myself at Khushi's place and think what I would do and that's what I put in as comment. whatever I said above I would have left my boyfriend/husband as if that person sleeps with woman once he will surely do it again and I would not like to be taken as granted...

second thing...every single FF about Arnav Khushi, Khushi always suffered by the hands of Arnav, she was raped, manhandled, treated as mistress or sex object and I do not like this sort of treatment towards Khushi as for me she is human being too. So when Khushi forgives Arnav easily I do not like that either...

I do not understand one thing...when Khushi makes mistakes she always get punished in every FF, bashed by readers and I never seen a single comment that she should have given a second chance too but when Arnav makes mistakes then he deserves second chance why this difference?

anyway this is your story, so it is up to you how you want to write it...I will not say anything any more...good luck...

Hey it's really interesting but pls pls pls pls don't let it be arnav let her open the door and see the face that its not arnav I felt like my heart is breaking with khushi do update soon...

loved it😛
fab😉
do update soon😃👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏thanks...fabulous...please continue👏👏👏👏

Who is excited to read it?
I finished writing the chapter one...
Awwwtchhh 😊
be prepared!... I'm your crazy girl
and I just want to Thank you for all your comments 😉