FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 23

Originally posted by: ramyarn

Loved u FF . U are such an amazing writer. If there was a separation track in IPKKND , just before the remarriage then the track like this would be effective.

Originally posted by: kbtr

Great update. So now everyone has forgiven him, except Kushi. And he thinks she should too. He just has to say sorry and that's it, huh? Not!!

I hope you don't make her forgive him so easily. I think I might be the only one here in the minority. But I really want him to understand and realize and go through the same fear as Kushi did when he left her at the altar without a second thought of how it might make her feel, or what it would do to her. He needs to go to hell and back and then she can forgive him! Because after all, they cannot survive without each other, eh? I'm still wondering though, how will she ever trust him again? Yeah, she loves him, obviously, but how in heaven's name can she ever trust him again? And what kind of love can one have without trust. A trust of conviction. A trust without fear. How? How can she ever be with him without doubting his love for her after what he did to her? How? I really want to see how you bring that about.

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next scene.😃

Originally posted by: Kurup

Hey Smitzyy...Firstly let me say that the VM was awesome and mindblowing, and it was just perfect as per the current situations that has been going on in this FF.

The update was as usual mindblowing...The emotional scenes between everyone made me also a bit emotional. Arnav nad Garima's confrontation was the best..I think thsi is the first time they might have shared a scrren space for such a long time and I again loved the dialogs between Payal and Arnav...

THnx 4 D PM

Originally posted by: Punkin22

Sorry Smitzy. I was in my office and my PA needed me immediately and I forgot to add comments about your VM. I am sorry sweetheart. You made a remarable VM. You selected some of the most beautiful and hurtful scenes of Arshi and each one had a memory attached. You then added music that was powerful and emotional and blended them both together and made a sensational VM. ASR has his work cut out for him to win back Khushi.

Also, your inbox is full Smitzy so I answered on thread. I will try to do better dear....

Originally posted by: segad

to see this scene on screen, we would need a truckload of glycerin for the actors. Like arnav's comment about the number of women and hence estrogen stimulated tear glands around him.

the mami dialog was spot on. pure mami

the 1-2 step tango bodes well for the next update.

looking forward to it.

Originally posted by: meradil

wow! kudos to another emotional packed scene!!!

seriously though, my personal opinion of course, you can so do this professionally!!!

you got mad skills :D

Originally posted by: DMG fan

We can only wish that some day the CVs and writers of the show will bring such justice to the character of the educated and professional male protagonist of the show, the way you are doing in this story. I dont know why this is so difficult for the writers of any show to keep true to the character and the audiences' intelligence. Today the show was such let down from Arnav's reaction point of view.

Your story is the only thing that makes me feel that show HAD some potential...but alas!

Thanks for treating us with such intelligent updates

RT

Originally posted by: asr13

res

Ye lo, she res-ed when I was writing replies to you lovlies ...😆

***** Un-resing *****

Scene 3

FANTASTIC !!!,

Standing ovation sweetie ...loved it !!!

Smiling proudly as I type ...dhamaka diya na after all ! See i had full confidence in you !

What an apology ...OH MY GAWWWD !!!

Garima ko toh warm hona hi tha, phir Payal ko bhi apology ...wo bhi warm ho gayee ...loved he Aap ke gusse ke kisse bahut sune hai hamn ...wah Payaliya, chauka laga diya !!!

Love the way he glances at the woman scorned remembering ...gusse mein aakar main sochna band kar deta hoon ! Loved it !

Loved Khushi wanting to listen but wonderng ki Jeeji aur Laad Governor kabse itne ache dost ban gaye !

It takes courage and some to do what the Raizadas have done today, specifically what Arnav has done today ...Hats off to you ! 👏 Hugs 🤗 !!!

The I-take-one-step-you-take-one-back thing made me smile ...so cute ! I am happy she is NOT giving in instantly ...but I can guarantee she will not be able to hold herself for very long ... Unless ofcourse kahani mein twist ho !

Cant believe I've swapped parties ...awful na ! But wo kya hai na, I am so in awe with your ASR, especially with the growth of his character that you have potrayed beautifully yet with poignancy ...that abhi I am completely with him on this, he needs her now ...Bas!

Hell and back ..kaha tha ...Hell tak toh pahunch gaya na ...ab wahan ka Tango next scene mein hehehe 😆😉

BTW ye Rajdhani express kyun ?😛

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

😊

Thanku once again!😃

Smitaa...kahan ho tum!?

~~Edited~~

Finally Un-reserving!😆

Okay that VM was Fantastic!⭐️👏

The moment i played and heard the tune a bit, i knew it was that song, though its been a while since i lisnted to it!
And i love that song! ❤️ Suited soo perfectly!
I actually played the VM thrice cause the first time i saw, i started singing along out loud!! 😆
The way u showed eveything was perfect! The flashbacks the fone call with payal and the convo with Anjali!!
When i watched it again I actually started to sing again in between so that i didnt get emotional!

And that saali part...Hahahaa...that was just funny!!🤣
And like a lot of nok-jhok coming our way! Cant wait for it!

Coming to the Scene :

I loved it it!❤️
You actually didnt make it over the top and get carried away!
What an apology!👏
First time have i seen Arnav speak so much and just let go!
And liked the fact that he was calm and composed and didnt breakdown after mentioning his mother and "us insaan!". And even after this he was the one comforting Garima.
Liked the fact that Anjali and even Naniji had joined in!

See, that why i like Garima. She understands what the other person might have gone through and forgives. And also loved the fact they hugged!!😊

And i actually liked Arnav's sense of humour. Rarely do u see it.
And Mami actually called Payal , "Payal"!!😲

Okay, can the relationship b/w Arnav and Payal be nemore awkward. I mean they are like Jethji and i do know what she is to him, and they act like that!!😕
I liked it that Payal understood why Arnav behaved like he did but still couldnt stand that he had treated her sis like that and was still pissed!

Arnav was walking towards her as if he was walking on a thin sheet of ice, could break netime!
And the Tango!! LOL!😆 Very true!

And yet again u finish at a wrong point!
Soo cannot wait for the kitchen confrontation! Definitely gonna be a screaming match!😃

Muah!

PS - Sorry for un-res so late!

Originally posted by: asr13

Damn this obsession !!!!

Once again ..in chorus ...DAMN !!! 🤣