Arhi FF[Complete] - Running From The Truth THREAD2 link pg 142

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: nikita_88
I loved the way you wrote the chapter...

But two things I didn't like A. Khushi's lie to NK that he would have been her choice, yes his life is messed up but I think in the long run he would have preferred the honesty because totally breaking his heart would give him a chance to totally move on...

B. The family forcing NK to marry La... A marriage made in compromise is never good for a kid in the long run again but who is ever going to understand that when society is there...

Sorry I don't mean to be rude just personal opinion hope you don't mind. I am sure you have a story in mind...

I don't mind at all, I love hearing opinions! I don't always agree with what I write either but sometimes it is necessary for the story to move on. Thank you for sharing that with me :)

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Omg what an update.. Loved how nk said what he wanted, and khushis one to one talk was needed... Glad Arnav helped her at the end of the updae :) lovely update :) thanks for the pm can wait for the next part :)

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

This chapter amazing..

Nk 's character make sense lot..

He accepting his kid but not ready to marry La

But Khushi convince him...

I didn't get the logic behind the lie... I wish she should stay calm or quite

The description about family and then their emotions too good.

Khushi why she said she lied to him .. she didn't infact she just didn't reveal the name of person whom she loved...

Arnav slept after four year poor man.. at the age of teenage he committed a mistake now he is paying for that..

Khushi is really brave and strong

Thanks for pm

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

beautiful update...glad to see NK taking a wise decision and looking forward to see what the future holds for arnav and kushi...continue soon...

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cutiepie_sarun

@cutiepie_sarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful. I love that you made khushi do that, personally I don't agree but that's why I loved it. Your characters are so imperfect and relatable. And nk khushi part was so so sad. The arnav khushi part was lovely, they are so made for each other. Loved it, ur fabulous.