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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

yaaayyy!!!!!...ur back!!!!🥳...i loved your update as always!...just brilliant!

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Ahhh Khushi is so confused!!!! Well makes sense she still thinks she is committed to her 'fianc'!!!

Well Amar turned out to be an ass! But I wonder who the wife is.. Anjali?!?

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Such a refreshing update - like freshly brewed coffee ! I have my cup of mocha with me right now. And its raining outside. And then theres your update. Perfect evening !

"Noticed that bustle or the skip in his step?"

Arnav is skipping. The heart flutters. :)

And the wonders of a red lipstick must never be underestimated. Or the trouble making powers of intrusion possessed by the subconscious. Irritating things, really.

" I hope whatever you're doing, you'll consider it from your brain.. and not vagina."

Haha ! How I love Payal. Khushi does need that warning! I remember her outburst in the first chapter, or in Arnav's words, "a demo of her .. thirst."

Moron.

Moron meets Ass.

Ass kiss Moron.

Moron tries to act sensible.

Ass kicks Moron.

And they lived happily ever after.

The story of Arnav and Khushi. In short. Perfect.

Now Arnav has a lot to make up for. Its not going to be enough, guessing her diary entries.

And Amar I see is the Shyam in this story. Is kahaani me villain bhi hai.

Tequila time. Let Arnav wait for the morning, while we wait for your next update :) Great job! Hope all the rubbing and scrubbing ordeal is done with!

Oh, and I got a PM this time! Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you !!! Muah !

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

I LOVED that part!!!! it was quite long too :)) but that just made it better :D

Khushi kept on interrupting him! hahah sooo funny!

and the kiss ;) ooh la la :)

i love the story. great job! and thank you for the pm

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

nd i just cant wait for the next update!! lol
this is such a cliffhanger!!!

and that bas***d Amar!!! he has a wife and a fiance??? wanna kill him!!🤢
nd lol these two battle so much tts a shame sometimes lol!!
nd i really wish she doesnt let him off the hook so easily!😉

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Wow!!!
That was an amazing update!!!
But khushi...srsly was this the time to get sense???:p
Avani and hp were awsome...
And amar's married???!!!!!:0 way a bas**rd!!!!!:@
Continue soon...

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Ultimatewishes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

WOW Amar is married ...ugh!! I feel sorry for Khushi...What will happen when she finds out, I Always knew he was freaky from the beggining .

Thannks for the update , loved it ...Khushi and Arnav make me LOL😆😆!!:) I can just imagine her with red lipstick , I'm guessing thats what got Arnav to kiss her , she probably hoped for it :)

and Wow she met his mum , things just became serious ...hs mom will soon realise the reason for the spring in his step

...though at the moment i love the sneak glances and flritatious glances...Lovely update though..thankss a lot your updates are much awaited!!:)):)

Edited by UltimateWishes - 12 years ago