FF : STB- Link to thread 2 PG 148 - Page 34

k so just caught up on chapters 5 and 6 and i must say i love the relations/characters in this FF be it from khushi and her mom and how they are more friends than mom and daughter, but are mom and daughter when needed.

then there is payal, she's only met arnav once i believe and when he came to pick up khushi was like "mid-night prince boy" and arnav laughing it off... so easy going down to earth all of them.

LOVE aman-aditi and aman-aditi-arnav and their nok-jhok about aman being a who's bitch...

and then of course there is the arnav and khushi--- hoping khushi breaks it off with amar and gives arnav a chance.

we finally get a glimpse of amar and something definitely seems fishy there... i'm glad you made khushi practical enough to ask what his boss's accident has to do with them... but regardless of job or anything, there is no reason to HIDE the fact that you are engaged, so why doesn't he want to at least make that known?... fishy fishy...

anyways, the best relationship is the one with khushi and her diary... its just so awesome. Will reading it, the inanimate book seems to have a life of its own... it's great

anyways, can't wait to read more... hopefully you'll keep this on FF instead of shifting it to a private blog... Will read while I can :)

Wow! Amazing part!!! So much going on with Khushi! It was really fun to read. I loved how the didn't turn out to be anything expected and that in the end Arnav stuck with her until she was home safely- even during the silence at starbucks. Great job! Thanks for the pm :)

Do you ever get tired of listening to how awesome you are with words?

thank u

Just came across this and read it all in one go.

I am absolutely in love with your writing.

amazing..bwt please add me to ur buddy list...a budddy req on ur way...love the flow of the ff...quite intriguing n gripping...the one liners are just perfect...amazingly written:)