ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor kushi..
Arnav is too much..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayad

I guess when you said he would be dark you meant it! Goodness he's with her mother and sleeping with Sheetal on his SR? Not sure I am able to stomach this ASR! Very cruel for

Khushi to be married to this bas***d! I guess he will realize what he has when he discovers she is pure!
I trust your writing so I am sure this will play out well but it was very difficult to accept this ASR!

Cheers


Maya di i always count on your comments and you know it. well i am not going to defend this Arnav of mine. i can just say there are real people like him and i am portraying the real world through this FF. Well actually speaking in reality characters like this ASR are much more cruel and dark. trust me i am not even writing 20% of what i thought i will right. and there are girls like Khushi who are married with these bas***ds. i cant say whether he will realize in this FF or not but in reality they dont trust me. but he will certainly discover her purity and i hope i will be able to then change his character but lets see i havent thought on those lines as of now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god...

Can Khushi be anymore innocent?

I can't imagine how broken she will be when she gets to know about her husband and mother's true face...

Poor girl... Is there more to this first night or is that all?

This story somehow has started giving me the chills...

Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy


Maya di i always count on your comments and you know it. well i am not going to defend this Arnav of mine. i can just say there are real people like him and i am portraying the real world through this FF. Well actually speaking in reality characters like this ASR are much more cruel and dark. trust me i am not even writing 20% of what i thought i will right. and there are girls like Khushi who are married with these bas***ds. i cant say whether he will realize in this FF or not but in reality they dont trust me. but he will certainly discover her purity and i hope i will be able to then change his character but lets see i havent thought on those lines as of now.

totally agreed with u appy real life may ASR jasay log chang nahin hootay ya agar hooon bhi to sirf kuch percant otherwise they nerver change
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Posted: 12 years ago
Appy,Maya, and Sammy I agree with you both...in real life the Guy like Asr character in this FF...never changes...a bitter truth...hard to swallow...just go to crime edition we find these type of bas***ds and mothers...in plenty...

This story atleast we are hoping from Appy we can see Asr change ...
Edited by GoGreen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi s so naive n innocnt... Poor gal...
She ddnt kno bout Arnav's real face...
Wat she'll do,,wen she coms 2 kno bout him nd his activities...??
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
khushi is too cute..and naive too
looks like ASR would have to deal too many things now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting update.
Khushi is so innocent .
Thanks for the pm dear.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are we getting update sooner yaar ??? I am just tooo excited so bit demanding lolz ! Just can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
W*F i hate zat sheetal mre nw…
nyways cntinue soon wil wait 4 ur pms…

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