ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141 - Page 46

Oh...Poor gal...
She has no idea, wats going happn...
As always dis story s also intrstng...
Cntinue soon

Aww poor Khushi yet agsin victim of Asr misunderstanding. Loved it Appy. thx

''''''Do you think I will ever accept her as my wife?'''''...poor khushi[u will regret arnav..]


thanks for pm

life is so cruel na..?? that mrs. gupta now disgust me.!!! ahh..

I read it... Finally! Why so threatning avatar at the very starting...? It indicated how dark the story is... 😆
That was really serious... She is just 18 yrs. Arnie is 28 yrs... Marriege is done! Phew! Every story had problem with marriage only... It too has... But still mental satisfaction... The marriage is done ritually n legally...
I love first person narrative stories. The point of veiws of every character comes out well.
In most of the stories, where Arnav is a devil he behaves devilishly... He never wears a mask on his face!
But this is dangerous... The way he said, 'aapne Khusi ka tilak nahi kiya'. He is pretending it... Thats evident from his point of veiw.
That means he will behave as a very good husband and then he will ditch Khusi... That is something really dark! Traitors are the darkest creatures n characters for me... U know 'u behave what u're case'... We can guess till what extent can Arnie bent! But.. He1e we have no idea...
Only abusing ***ually is not darkness... This story is gonna prove what darkness really means.. I am sure of that.
Khusi has stepped into the den.. Lion is now enjoy his hunger to enjoy his prey more awfully! This is the gist what I got in my mind.
I am so scared to read this story.
Thanks for the PM. Do continue soon.

awesome update.
it geting interesting how al thought of khushi nd whn they finally gng to knw how khushi iz so innocent dat must be big interesting twist.
cont soon

And I just noticed.. Its an S.S. n not a F.F. U know today I trust in the saying 'Everything happens for good'.
U know why...
Suppose u had updated AtoL, OA, MMB, ID in regular basis they all would have ended till now!
But, there's a severe need for it now... When we came across a ss like BFTW3.
Okay... Seriously I never imagined BFTW will be of this type scary concept... But as u say, when have ur stories been predictable???
Still cannot digest this darky fact.
But as ur stories are unpreductable... I can assure myself(jhoota hi sahi) that Arnav will know about her innocence before he does that type of things with his sasumaa... I mean Arnie kuchh toh sharam karo... A 'maa' is associated with it...
And I love Anjali's character. Its seems like a natural human being's behavior n instinct... In reality none will be able to accept her so easily though she has no faults.. But still... Thinking 'real-ly'.
And thanks preserving all the romantic light-hearted works... Will surely need it!

awesome update. Omg! Khushi doesnt knw what she has signed for. She is innocent here!

excellent update, was simply mind blowing. loved it!

Awesome update... Khushi doesn't wat is waiting 4 her :(... Well update soon