ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141

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kethgauthami1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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great...simply suprb so arnav thinks bad about kushi and his family too...liked everything...waiting for ur next update...so i think ur first few updates will be about their past..interesting

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

wonderful start..cant wait to read more

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shivu124

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

aww i feel really sorry for the khushi

poor her she has to suffer this cuz of her mom... =(

pm me wen u write again

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Mishika Bedi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Aww, continue soon dear!
This is my fav of all your works!

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Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Amazing start, Appy!! 👏 Thank you so much!!! I feel so terrible for Khushi!! 😭 She's so young and naive! This is too good!! Please, please continue soon!!

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

You write such hard hitting stories with fantastic concepts that I can never make up my mind which is my favorite...until I read this it was ONS2?...but after reading this one chapter, BFTW3 is my all time favorite.

My heart already breaks for this innocent 18 year old who has no idea what her mother is and her husband is using her and is under the impression at she is just like her mother...wow. Can hardly wait for more.

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

wow! brilliant! so Arnav is using both mother and daughter poor Khushi she is unaware of her mother's deed...she will be shattered when she'll learn the truth...poor soul