ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141

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Khushi_Sarun

@Khushi_Sarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

awesome... Loved it... Arnav is so bad in this ff... Hope he will love khushi atleast in the end...

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deep5128

@deep5128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Awesome teaser.. Looking forward to read more

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

poor kushi really feel sad for her...hope she will overcome dis soon...and moreover for the property kushi's mom and asr will definitely dont let her to abort wen thy comes to no abt her preganancy...waiting for the chapters to come...thanks for the teaser...

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Di,i have edited my comment,i won't say on which page,before you better promise me to start this asap for you..
no smiley for you who is being 😈 and teasing me. .😉

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

gawd appy!!

patah nahin kya kahoon!!

i thot the entire thing will revolve arnd arnav falling for khushi after all.. real love etc etc .. but to face the fact and see the husband sleeping arnd with his mother in law .. its outright incredulously shameful!!

- i hope i read it correctly ... is arnav actually gonna sleep with his MIL in front of his wife!??

if yes .. then i swear ... this man does not deserve any love at all!! even if he changes for her in future...

a no no from me for this man.. who is nuthing but a complete debaser...

there cant be a possible love story created arnd this man!!

but yes from story perspective ... i must say its a big challenge for u... all the very best sweetie!! u will yetb again emerge as a wonderful writer!!

Kudos on the subject .. quite an intense one!!

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

interesting teaser, feeling bad for khushi.

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Ruki.F

@Ruki.F

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

WOW Appy .. that was Amazing ..really wut person can do in that situation.. plzzz start this FF as soon as u can ...cant wait to read more

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Shit man Arnav is pathetin in this ff!

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

ehu ehu...paro di...

this story truly much dark...

arnav is here more than beast...

n khushi's mom more than witch...

aww khushi suffering...nw will abort the baby...

waiting excitedly fr update...di...

pilijjj di...it start before bonded 2 end...

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sam88

@sam88

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

arnav made love to khushi it was not only s*x... does this means he has some feelings for khushi ...the way she dosent want arnav to know abt her preg ...may b she hopes dat arnav will not agree for an abortion... want to read more ... its really interesting