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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This is wonderful.. Pride and Prejudice is my all time favorite..not to mention that am in love with Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth for a far longer time than Arnav and Khushi...so your portrayal of Arnav and Khushi in P & P light is all the more awesome..It fits them perfectly..And you have portrayed it beautifully..I will definitely be thrilled if you continue this..If you continue this please pm me..i don't want to miss it..;)

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Loved it :)
after recievin lots of likes and comments, please decide to continue afterall thanks :)

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

First...Please continue :)

Second...It was a very cute update...i loved the simplicity and its innocence in this piece of work...Loved it...Fabulous :)

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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Loved it! They used to remind me of Lizzie and Darcy when the show 1st started...

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Poor guy!

Iss attractionwa ko kya naam doon..

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

well well
that was really amazing
loved it dear

Edited by luvbarunsanaya6 - 13 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
Maar Khayegi if you call this lame. I loved it! I was mesmerised by your writing Sami. If you call this one lame and the other one good, I am already excited to read the other one.

This OS is incomplete. Did you forget the part where Khushi is forced by her Buaji to take him to the mela for a Rabba Vey with Arnav Bitwa?

Dekh tere MS word mein ho ga woh part!

Mein toh tere pyaar mein gir gayi Sami :D

Awww thanks 🤗

ha ha No khushi will not go with him

she'll show attitude 😆

Thanks thanks thanks

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Fantastic...
N I request u to PLEASEEE continue with this os. It's gonna be lot of fun.. Wanna see how arni eats his own words, classless n finally n irreversibley fall for her.
U knoW A DIFFERENT LOVE STORY!!!
So plz continue it...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Omg!! That was one helluva f an os!! It had all the essence f superbly well written work!! And u dnt plan to continue?? Srry but d plan has to change :p we want d judgemental guy whose already changed his judgementss a bit will completely change it in d gumao part if nt der den lzwer but do continue sami!! Plsh
cheers for the pm :)

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

back to jane austen book days for me..

beautifully written...

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