GAME TIME RETURNS/ LAST PART page 67 - Page 20

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey continue soon ruhee....cant wait any longer!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great parts 😊 😊 😊
continue soon 😊 😊 😊
can't wait more plzzzzzzzzz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

just fab yaar.
i just loved the twist u have added... but r these 2 from opp countries or something like that...
i will love 2 see who wins the game...
plz continue soon

angad and kripa are agents for the same country but for 2 agent groups that hate each other

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Posted: 19 years ago
part 11



josh turns around to see kripa and angad realy angry at him

j-i better run

a-ya you better

josh jumps over the sofa and angad starts running after him soon angad catches josh and kicks him in the stomch

j-what was that for

a-that was for you to know how it feels to get kicked in the stomch realy hard

kripa giggles a little because she remembers when joahs had kicked angad in his room

j-i had said sorry

a-ya but i was still pissed now were even

s-come on stop fighting you all go and pack your clothes and get ready to go on your trip it is for tommrow

aliaya and ria go to there house to pack angad josh kripa and prithiv go to there room to pack.

in angads room

angad put in a shirt and then throught in a gun

a-(thinking)just in case

then angad through in some jeans and put in explosives

a-(thinking) just in case

in kripas room

kripa dose the same thing throughts in some tops and then guns then throughs in jeans then explosives

angads room

angad calls the servent

servent-sir

a-take me bag down stairs

servent-yes sir

the servent trys to pick up the bag but it wouldnt lift

a-i guess i better take out some things

angad opens the bag up and the servent see that the bag bearly has any clothes in there. angad on the other hand lifts up she jeans and the servent saw explosives angad took the explosives out then put the jeans back in then angad life the shirt and took out the huge guns but kept the normal sized ones in his bag. angad then closed his bag and gave it to the servent

a-take this now

the servent who was shock at seening so many wepones in one day wondered why angad was takeing all this. the servent took the bag down stairs because he was to afrid to ask angad any questions due to him haveing a gun in his hand

in kripas room

kripa calls the servent to her room and tell him to take the bag down stairs. the servent tried to lift the bag but he couldnt because of it being so heavy

k-better take so things out

kripa opens the bag and we see a lot more wepons then angad put in his bag. kripa took out every thing except a few gun and extra bullets

k-ok take this

kripa hands the bag to the servent and now the servent is more confused because angad took out wepones kripa took out wepons but josh and prithiv didnt take out wepons

servent takes the bag down stair very confused. dillip sees the servent confused and asked him what happed

d-what happed y do you seem confused

servent-sir i dont get it angad had wepons in his bag and kripa had wepons in her bag but prithiv and josh have on wepons. dillip gets shocked and tell the servent to go and the servent leaves. dillip diles a number on his phone

d-hello

person-hell

d-why did you make kripa and angad agents, they will kill each other

person-well it is the rules if a agent dies and has a son or daughter when of age they become the next agent

d-but angad and kripa might kill each other, just like there mothers had

person-well thats your problem not mine

the person and dillip hang up

d-(thinking)hopefully angad loves kripa enough that he wont blow kripa up with a torpido



hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up all 6 friends go to the beach and angad and kripa fight but can find there wepons 😉
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice when r u continuin? n all ur stories has a secret identity like angad unknown angad doctor n now angad n kripa agent all this is so different n that's wat it makes the story different nice y don't ria be played by kumud u noe.. just a suggestion n angad n kripa r agents n still go 2 college right?
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part ruhee!! 😳
so their moms were agents and died...
sad... anyways
continue when you can! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
there moms killed eachother! 😲 woh! I never saw that coming! anyway good part!
plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
omggg so that means their moms didnt leave them but they killed each other......continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: bhumishah

nice when r u continuin? n all ur stories has a secret identity like angad unknown angad doctor n now angad n kripa agent all this is so different n that's wat it makes the story different nice y don't ria be played by kumud u noe.. just a suggestion n angad n kripa r agents n still go 2 college right?

ya ok i will put in my next part that ria will be played by kumud

and ya they will be agents and go to collage which will make the story better

Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja922

omggg so that means their moms didnt leave them but they killed each other......continue soon 😛

lol lots of twist and turns that happend😉

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