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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Love the whole update and esp these lines

"Rage at himself; love and longing for her coursed through him like water and oil...could the two ever blend. Why had she picked such a broken person to fall in love with screamed his brain?! "
👏 so meaningful...

continue soon...

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

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Wonderful update.So, Arnav's guard is finally down in front of Khushi well this is the relationship that the loved one's share with each other.

Mohit is three and a half years old and I'm teaching him his alphabet' 🤣 I don't want to hurt sentiments of anyone but still I can't stay without loling on it.

I must say what a kiss,it was intense.

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

wow wow wow man..m just mesmerized by this.

i mean all of these things that you have written are so true.!
none of 'em are fictional as these things do happen in a relationship.

the way you write all of it really left me awe. huff maarr dala.! do continue soon..

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

naina.. you are on roll girl.. updates pe updates.. I m loving it.. it was beautiful.. her time with Nani..

today i saw the arnav as he is.. i mean rough, arrogant, guarded.. not that i don't like the gentle and nice one.. it is just that this one turns me on ;)... lol

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Naina - "Arnav sighed as he ran his hand through his now very short black."

What a jab. I am sure the pun here was totally intended.

"Very Short Black" indeed.

Loved Arnav's struggle but have faith that his love will overcome his trepidation.

Pankaj

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: warriorprincess

Farha... My Jaan... I can see I have to bump up my game, I can't have you guessing things! Ahaaa challenge for Naina I see!

Ok biology class... I didn't get time to ummm 'study' so that's why biology was absent today 😆 As for naughty Miss Gupta... our darling tiger has NO IDEA of what she's capable of😈

P.s glad the kiss hit the mark!!

😆😆

Chalo! No more guessing games .. just keep the biology classes coming. I will keep my mouth shut. 😆

Well, seriously dear, it is just that you have built up these two characaters over the previous chapters so well and also been so consistent that we do understand their thought process now. You should really pat on your back for that. You have done a great job here .. I feel like sort of anylyzing what is to come, as I do in Crooner for the show itself. 😆

Will be waiting to see Arnav vs. Arnav .. !! It is going to be intense .. I assume .. but cant predict with you around!! 😆😆