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Shruti

@ShrutiPandey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

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It's been a month! part 27!
please!!

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kalpna

@goyalkalpna123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

plz pm me part 26 and add me in ur buddy list plz plz

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@Deleted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Hey muskaan ..im truly your fan now ..i just read your story today in one go !!! cant believe that you are such an awesome writer ..i cried when i saw emotional scenes when i got to know that UV was waiting for khushi i knew that she at last she would be of asr and such a cute person would under go heart break cant bear it ..!!

my heart went out for khushi ..her father how can i preson be so cruel ..!!!

i love dan !! the way he feared and anji ..both has such an awesome chemistry in this story and i loved the way arnav adressed her as his daughter !!

gosh !! i was shocked when i came to know that khuhsi shot her father wel, he deserve it but it was totally out of blue well then i love uv and khushi cute masti and dan ,anji ,khushi ,uv ,payal their antics truly touch my heart

thanks for this wonderful story !!!!

thats really a greta story !!!

i just read it !! and send u a buddy request plzz accept it and i want to read part 26 !!

im truly n madly in love with your story ..pls do continue soon n you quote also touch my heart the one you wrte aboyt fate n destiny !!!

pls update soon

love ...x...

Ash ...!!!

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bhuvii

@bhuvii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Hiii...

Muskiii let me address you like it dude ...
i just read your story in a go ...
wooowww its really an awesome story ...
wow you gave lots of emotions ,feeling,love ,friendship ,and what not ...you described every emotions very well ...
first when arnave met kushi in uv hotel he miss behaved with her ...i taught he such a bad guy ...but you turned his character as an inevitably a nice person ...not just nice person but oxygen of kushi...i was stun wow ...
uv oh god what a beautiful soul he was ...i just love him more than arnav ...i love you uv ...andmind its not because of sympathy...this uv lives in my mind ...he s not leaving me ... he he he ...
muskiii thanks for that character ...
Here comes the next male character DAN ... oh teri he s such a cuty pie ...wow if i am before him means i whold like to pull his cheeks and kiss him like when arnav and uv kissed after anji and teased you know ..oh my god that wa awesome part ...dan cared for kushi like his sis .wow its gr...
Anji boldness conversion wit vji was great ...
payal stunt was good ...oh my god anjis clues were awesome and how arnav got t and resued them and that whold update was great ...brilliant awesome fantastic and what not ... you r a brilliant writter . i know i don't wat to mension it ...because you r a awesome writer ...

great work ...i just put my small taughts her ... i have lots more to tell you ...but don't know how to put it n words muskiii ...thank god i got a glimps of this wonderful story ...that to in go i read this without any delay ...oh god now i am feelings ...pls pm the next update to me ...waiting egearly ...

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ipkknd_gbdfan

@ipkknd_gbdfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

I read the entire FF today...don't know how I came across it or how I missed it...

Anyways, I loved the characters:

Payal and Anjali were actually strong - I hate them in the show, but in WDBN, they are amazing! (I really liked the part where Payal was knocking off the bad guys and Anjali was smashing them on the head with a chair. And when Anjali gave Arnav the clue - in the show, she is brainless and would have said something like "Chote! *sob* Shaid koi galat famiya ho gayie hai, or inn logo ne mujhe kidnap kar liya hai. Aapne dawaiya le?")

UV was amazing...I am still a bit sad that he left for some time...I would have wanted him to love Payal instead and have friendly love towards Khushi - but you're the mastermind behind the FF! :D

Dan was awesome! So scared of Arnav...it was a ROTFL moment. :D

I also love how your updates are long - although I really didn't have to wait for any updates yet - let's see how bad the waiting gets before I complain :D

You mentioned that Part 26 couldn't be posted on the forum...could you PM it to me?

Also, why don't you create a blog with this story and post Part 26 and other mature content parts there? I can do it for you if you want...(Although, I recommend posting the chapter(s) on the blog a few weeks after you update, just to make sure that more people comment...cause commenting on IF is easier than commenting on a blog, which would require signing up, etc.)

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

awesome story... kindly send me link 4 part 26😊

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manjulak18

@manjulak18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

I cannot believe I missed this FF. I was searching the IF and found this one .Truely amazing . I read all in one go spedning 2 straight hours. Awesome updates. Please PM me with the part 26 and update me with your work. Truley a good writer you are .. Hope to read more of yours .

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Tulipdulip

@Tulipdulip

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Pls send the link for part 26...pls pls..

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maggie

@maggie

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

hello.. I just read all of it in one go! ijust couldn't stop!!i love this story very much and i must say you are very talented. i feel so sorry for uv... he is everything every girl would wish for. plz send me pm for part 26