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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

That was awesome. What a twist at the end. Waiting to read more.

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

frankly didn't see tht slap coming

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

K ... Thanks for this link ... would love to read the whole story ... 😃

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What's in a name? :P

@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Super Fantastic part...Just loved it

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

kahani mein twist!

where the hell from has payal come!!!

n who is she?? n y she is telling arnav she is pregnant!

i dunt think arnav has done anything to hurt khushi but for khushi seeing another girl shouting at arnav saying she is pregnant for sure is going to be interpreted in the wrong way! is there going to be a misunderstanding.

wonderful update for this ff but not fair ending it with such a cliffhanger!

cant wait for the next part:)

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annys

@annys

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Nice part.. Payal is preganat? What a End.

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neha

@neag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

she came for help.as she is his bro GF

it has to like this...funny thing going to come

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#868

ALL YOU GIRLS WRITING ...YOU ARE A RIOT

KAHANI KI ITNI'' DUMB '' [AS IN PAYAL ] TWIST HAHAHA

CAN'T STOP LAUGHING

KHUSHI IS WITH ARNAV AND PAYAL GOT THE FRUIT TO BEAR ...

YOU ALL ROCK

CONTINUE

AND LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE

KKKA

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Prasanna_dhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#869

Awesome twist and great update , thanks for the PM

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mirka88

@mirka88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#870

The link always opens for me with the likes part and I have to scroll up to read the post and in the process I read 'Payal... I am pregnant, Arnav'..

Spoiler -.-

But still loved it!! Khushi is crazy.. Arnav is cool.. why'd he dress if he was going to divest of them in a few minutes. :P

I love their interactions... I really hope that Payal is someone related to Arnav and most definitely not romantically.. maybe she's his sister, or friend who he was not expecting and suddenly came to tell him of her pregnancy with some one else..?? fingers crossed for my wish.. :P

This is one of my favourite stories and its hard to wait between updates.. hint hint guys.. hurry ;)